I love hot wife stories, especially the female POV. You and hubby obviously have worked it all out for both of you to enjoy to the max this unique freedom. Hope you have many more adventures to share with us.
terrifically written, gave it five stars though the actual sex ought to be more proportionate to the set up in your next story. You can do that be adding detail of what she felt, what he or she touched while they fucked, the feelings of those orgasms, etc...
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Anonymous06/01/13
what is eroticism
while dancing what were you feeling. how was he reacting. did he stroke you had you stockings on,what was his cock like pressing against you. did you help his fumblings.
best eroticism is older women such as you doing this to a shy boy and then taking him to your room and seducing him by guiding his every move including kissing leading his hands to secret places. Pre love in cloths is much more erotic than just gulping down cum or swallowing meat. describing feelings tentative actions with words like feel,sweat,smell,breath, skirt ,nylon,thigh,swish,rustle,heat,breathing,etc can be so erotic especially if and older women is teaching,encouraging,seducing a shy tentative first timer or am i wrong.
Another excellent story about an older woman teasing a younger man; but this time the guy was allowed the release he needed after being teased to boiling point.. For the conclusion alone I'd like to give you 6 stars, but it will have to be 5 stars again.
Weĺl written and loved the storyline but would benefit from more detail? Especially the rushed ending
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Anonymous02/02/15
The psychodynamics between her & her hubby was described perfectly
She is a loving wife and a keeper!
I myself know to a point the pleasure a voyeur husband feels when another man starts hitting on his wife. I know how confused a voyeur husband feels when he sees another man stroking, petting, caressing and sweezing her bare ass and thighs while she is riding him in our marital bed!
I now realize that i have had strong voyeur side since childhood but did not know what it was & how to call the sensation i had in certain circumstances.
I loved when guys stare at my girlfriend or my wife. I thought i simply was proud she is mine. The feeling was more complex than that. I realized what it was when my first wife started flirting with other men... then when i suspected she was having an affair.
I instantly became fully aware of my voyeur side when i cought them naked in bed in our house. BTW it was not me who filed for divorce but 2 years later she left me for another man (her lover # 3 or 4).
English
Outstanding!
Fantastic Story
Hope to read more.
Nice
My only criticism is that the ending felt rushed.
After all the build up the private time with Andrew could have been a few sentences longer.
And the last paragraph could easily have been as long as the rest of the story. Or maybe another chapter.
Anyhow, I enjoyed your story and am looking forward to reading more of your work.
Thank you!!
I am thrilled that some of you like my story. I will write more! Thank you for your comments and suggestions.
Get busy on your next one!
Welcome!
I love hot wife stories, especially the female POV. You and hubby obviously have worked it all out for both of you to enjoy to the max this unique freedom. Hope you have many more adventures to share with us.
rushed the sex a bit
terrifically written, gave it five stars though the actual sex ought to be more proportionate to the set up in your next story. You can do that be adding detail of what she felt, what he or she touched while they fucked, the feelings of those orgasms, etc...
what is eroticism
while dancing what were you feeling. how was he reacting. did he stroke you had you stockings on,what was his cock like pressing against you. did you help his fumblings.
best eroticism is older women such as you doing this to a shy boy and then taking him to your room and seducing him by guiding his every move including kissing leading his hands to secret places. Pre love in cloths is much more erotic than just gulping down cum or swallowing meat. describing feelings tentative actions with words like feel,sweat,smell,breath, skirt ,nylon,thigh,swish,rustle,heat,breathing,etc can be so erotic especially if and older women is teaching,encouraging,seducing a shy tentative first timer or am i wrong.
deeply erotic
great sensual and seductive account.
I lo ved your story...
Thank you for sharing this wonderful story. I gave you a 5 star rating!
RecHiker
Another excellent story about an older woman teasing a younger man; but this time the guy was allowed the release he needed after being teased to boiling point.. For the conclusion alone I'd like to give you 6 stars, but it will have to be 5 stars again.
Excellent start, more detail please
Weĺl written and loved the storyline but would benefit from more detail? Especially the rushed ending
The psychodynamics between her & her hubby was described perfectly
She is a loving wife and a keeper!
I myself know to a point the pleasure a voyeur husband feels when another man starts hitting on his wife. I know how confused a voyeur husband feels when he sees another man stroking, petting, caressing and sweezing her bare ass and thighs while she is riding him in our marital bed!
I now realize that i have had strong voyeur side since childhood but did not know what it was & how to call the sensation i had in certain circumstances.
I loved when guys stare at my girlfriend or my wife. I thought i simply was proud she is mine. The feeling was more complex than that. I realized what it was when my first wife started flirting with other men... then when i suspected she was having an affair.
I instantly became fully aware of my voyeur side when i cought them naked in bed in our house. BTW it was not me who filed for divorce but 2 years later she left me for another man (her lover # 3 or 4).
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