73 Things To Do Ch. 01

I do hope you are doing more chapters:)

Good

That was a great opener , hope you have more pieces

WTF?!

What crazy sh t i cant believe this story it was horrible!
Don't read it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Talent

That is some very fine writing. You are talented. I really liked the narrative. I hope there is more soon ...... soon, you hear?

Fantastic!

Can't wait for more.

Outstanding .....

You write extremely well. I am always thrilled with words that really tell a story. Many times it gets in the way of the erotic component but your outstanding writing does not. There are very few writers on this service that write with your ability to craft a good story along with being able to arouse the reader. Well done.
Yes. More.

Wow..

Excellent read. Didn't know where the first bit was going but, thankfully, read on. Thank you, I look forward to you posting chapter two!

Holy Cats!

This was almost sublime. I know that seems a bit over the top for a story on a free erotic story site, but so much of it rang so true, I wa completely enthralled while reading it. I am most certainly, anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

Fantastic

One of the best. Can't wait for the next instalment.

Great writing all round

Can we make it 74 Things To Do, by adding a chapter 2, to the list. This was such an interesting and different story with an unexpected twist at the end. I am anxious to see the exploits the women get into next. Thanks nineveritae for the good read