The Ballad of Zachery Carson Ch. 02

Another well architected story by Woodmanone

I have all ready started downloading Zane Gray to my Kindle. Woodie really produces some interesting characters. Kathleen seems tremendously adaptable and a fast learner!

Very good, so far. I new I should have waited for you to complete this whole story before I started reading. Now I can't wait for more!!!

LIFE ON THE RANGE IS HARD

and all the bad guy not withstanding. TK U MLJ LV NV

@ Anonymous

Your comments are valid so far as they go. Horseshoes would leave a clear trail on cap-rock. Where in the story have you found a reference to Buck being shod ?? While it is an easy assumption to make, not all "westerners" shod their horses. I own and ride 3 horses, none of which need shoes, because I pay attention to their feet. With the care that Zach shows for Buck, and the trail skills described, it would be a reasonable idea to me that he is not shod.

More Excellent writing, Woody

and a Mr. Anonymous with any education would know to put an "an" before words beginning with a vowel.

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Very nicely Done

I've only read the 2 chapters so far, but I will continue to the end if the quality stays as high as those I've read.

I do have a couple of minor quibbles, but nothing enough to distract from the 5* I gave you on both chapters.

Keep up the good work.

Mike