More, oh and please some more. Did I mention that you need to write MORE!
If I hadn't mention it already more please my sexy lady. Oh and shouldn't a lady always tip her hat to a gentleman.....oh thats right I'm not a gentleman. but the Eagle does give it two talons up.....
Love your story. Please keep writing, I am very much waiting for the next chapters. The style you write in definitely rakes a person feel like part of the story. I have some found memories (and current events) of my own. And your stories make me recall every detail.
Loved the story. I was hoping she might get another repeat performance with her parents only watch it this time with Dylan. Then they get some action. Looking forward to the rest ot the story. Hopeful we will see more of this family after the shopping spree.
Please give us more of this one. I want to see how it all goes, from the Mall to home. Please give your fans what they want and continue this one. *Maybe change it up from wht you had in mind to keep us all guessing* lol.
I loved the naughty nature of this bridge. Keeping the story moving erotically without overdoing it. I like how she teased him without realizing it at first.Naughty peeks are so much fun. I can't wait til they get to the mall and see how it ends up. Great work.
English
More, oh and please some more. Did I mention that you need to write MORE!
If I hadn't mention it already more please my sexy lady. Oh and shouldn't a lady always tip her hat to a gentleman.....oh thats right I'm not a gentleman. but the Eagle does give it two talons up.....
More Please
Love your story. Please keep writing, I am very much waiting for the next chapters. The style you write in definitely rakes a person feel like part of the story. I have some found memories (and current events) of my own. And your stories make me recall every detail.
Great story
Loved the story. I was hoping she might get another repeat performance with her parents only watch it this time with Dylan. Then they get some action. Looking forward to the rest ot the story. Hopeful we will see more of this family after the shopping spree.
More more more!!
Please give us more of this one. I want to see how it all goes, from the Mall to home. Please give your fans what they want and continue this one. *Maybe change it up from wht you had in mind to keep us all guessing* lol.
MasterTiger
Suspense
I love the slow build of this one. I'll be waiting to see what happens next. Thanks, as always!
sweet
I loved the naughty nature of this bridge. Keeping the story moving erotically without overdoing it. I like how she teased him without realizing it at first.Naughty peeks are so much fun. I can't wait til they get to the mall and see how it ends up. Great work.
Tease
Nice continuation Tiki, I'm enjoying the tease.
Uncle Mike
Sounds like Uncle Mike might get Lucky tonight ! Good story so far Tina !
Ward
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