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by Angeline05/11/13

A bit tamer than some of your other pieces

and doesn't have quite the punch therefore. Still, I absolutely love this:

"All of the puzzle pieces fit. Then they all detached like plate tectonics."

It would be fascinating to see a whole bunch of these poems together, like a chapbook. Ever considered that?

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by susansnow05/12/13

Angeline

I've considered the chapbook route. I have a couple of larger pieces in the same vein as these that I've consider breaking up into sections. I might, one day. Thanks so much for your feedback and comments.

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