Revelations Ch. 03

Pretty dark

Can't figure why "Gary" won't move on. He should get counseling. What's done is done. Time to build a new life. But how is he living with his 56 year old lover (prior chapter) if he drinks all day and has nightmares all night? Seems a contradiction to me.

Story switched from third person to first in at least one section. This episode seemed short because nothing really happened. We only know the children (per lover's letter, they are implicitly not his biologic children) have received and reacted to his letters and the DVD, and wife Vanessa had a meltdown.

Finally, I agree with others that the "she was drugged" ploy fails the smell test. She kept going back for more -- a drugged person doesn't do that. Was she drugged when she wrote her loving emails? Was she drugged when she secretly traveled to meet her lover? I think the story has too many plot holes at this stage. Two stars; author, please get some editing or reviewing help.

Lets not go down the road of Gary /Victor taking the whoring slut back. Maybe she got a drug from the bastard to ease the pain of a big cock , but sure as shit she let it go on and on and on. actually it would be better if gat AIDS and died a miserable death

done

the author took a story that had an ending that they didn't like and is attempting to twist the ending to meet their expectations and in the process shot themselves in the foot and trashed another writers work. Carvohi you may proceed without Me I am Done with this garbage.

She's a fucking whore

They better not get back together. She's a fucking whore and should never have put herself in the position to fuck someone other than her husband. I hope to god that Victor grows some balls and gets a new lady in his life. Fuck his ex. Get over it and move on.

Don't stop here

need to keep going

Drugged Really

I have to agree with other comments regarding the drug situation. She may well have been drug. It may have been so she could accommodate the extra large cock ( by the way what surgically enhanced procedures would produce such a large cock ) but she she meet up with him by travelling, and e mail sex.
she is guilty as charged.

Really now you want to give the whore an excuse

Great 2nd chapter, but Fuck you on this bullshit 3rd chapter. You are reverting back to being a piece of shit. She is a cheating heartless whore CUNT! You can't change that now and even call yourself a man. Don't go there. Be true to the 2nd chapter in the next.

i think he was pretty well gobsmacked with the reply to this chapter and he is busy in re-write. he did not appreciate my "Victor's Victory" which was my version of an ending to alex lovers revelations but was man enough to stand up and say it. so i am going to give him the benefit of the doubt and see if he can work his way out of this.

when's the next chapter coming out?

when's the next chapter coming out?

DOES CHANGING A NOUN NAME

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Pfft

If you respond to your wife's infidelity by trying to cut the KIDS out of your life, you're not going to end up looking like the good guy...to them or anyone.

And ignore the btb crew. Their volumous whine is merely a combination of impotent anger and child-like fit throwing.

Drugs???

I don't buy it. The adultery went on for decades. Unless you come up with something really unique it won't be convincing. Waiting for chp3.

Better off dead

Victor is behaving like a spoiled child. With any luck a shark will eat him and then we won't have to listen to his sniveling. She wouldn't want to take back the louse at this point anyway. And NOBODY believed he had the balls to kill himself. If he didn't have the heart to stay and fix his life, why would we assume he had the courage to end his pathetic existence?

OK then - he has llost it too

That was a given -

We were never given evidence to suggest the B&D or the gang bangs as I recall so the kids should not have gotten it either - small issue when you see where James is headed but still a major variance with the original.

We are being set up for her not being in control - a truism but not because of drugs (no earlier evidence so while possible it seems a stretch) BUT from her own hubris and failure to understand herself or her actions - she was selfish and foolish - she acted stupidly.

Well again let's see where we go - as a story it is a good one if an imperfect continuation - but then i ain't perfeK neither heh

bad chapter

it was going good in the previous chapter, then you screw it up with the gangbang and date rape drugs, couldn't you just leave it alone that she fell in love with the guy, and victor moved on, maybe even contact Paula........

Beside struggling with English, author appears to be on drugs when writing.

Meth is such a bad drug.

Pretty sorry continuation..

Turned out to not be worth the reading.

What!

It's almost as if this chapter was written by a different person.

Date Rape, Date Shmape!

Even IF she was drugged, now, when she is straight, she claims she did nothing wrong, that she was healing a poor broken man.

Couple Of Things

First, you are adding things into "evidence" that weren't in the initial story, primarily the gang bang. And while there was ample kinky sex described, the rim job just doesn't fit.

And as I said in my earlier comment, date rape doesn't explain her initial "curative" blow jobs, or her attempts to defend her actions.

This author is truly sick.

Sorry pathetic piece of cow manure.

A message for anon 7-29-14...

You're appraisal is pretty accurate, and that's why I didn't go any further. Try one of my other, later, stories...please. I'd hate to think you, or anyone stopped reading me because of this story.

A big p.s. to Can't Buy and to Harry...

Harry your comments are accurate, and Can't Buy I know I've thanked you somewhere for your bailing me out on this one. Your Victor's Victory got me off the hook here.

this chapter doesn't even mesh your own previous set up

How can he be both happy with his new girlfriend and drink himself to oblivion at home alone?
A date rape drug does not explain the many emails exchanged over the years with additional pictures and their continued expressions of endearment. All while many miles apart and under no influence of drugs.
And you are changing the foundation upon which the story was based by adding scenes to the DVD that were not there before this chapter.
This "conclusion" is not bringing any closure to the work that started all this. Instead it is just adding more coal to the fires.

WHORE

WHAT A WHORE SHE ADMITTED SHE HAD AFFAIR IN THIS CHAPTER. MAYBE SHE CAN

BURN IN HELL.

RON

LADIES GO SHOPPING

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Gosh, carvohi is going to justify the whore.

Usual carvohi justify a slut tale and make a wimp out of a husband. Not much of a man are you carvohi.

Re-Reading

I know a couple of my comments here are repeats, but here goes!

“Now they'll see, they'll know”

She should be proud! After all, what she did was an act of mercy, right? She did nothing wrong.

I’m sorry, I’m NOT buying the “she was drugged” story. MAYBE she was, but she admitted to inviting Harry into her room and seducing him, and now, years later and presumably off the drugs, she was still insisting she did nothing wrong until Victor’s vengeance got through to her.

And what’s with Harry being “hung like a horse”? Earlier it was described as just maybe being a LITTLE thicker than Victor’s

Thoughts

Frankly, I’m surprised he’s so miserable – true, he had a wretched thing happen to him, but he got a good measure of revenge, and now has the chance to live some sort of a “good life”.

“I'm sorry. I was wrong, I was stupid. You've got to forgive me.”

MAYBE if she said that when he first confronted her SOMETHING about their relationship could have been saved, even if it was no better than an amicable divorce, at least there would still be SOME sort of a relationship.

“I never dreamed I'd be caught. I never imagined you'd find out. I had no idea how hard it could be for you, for me.”

Not to repeat myself, but if what she is doing is so good and noble, why would she even THINK about getting “caught” or him finding out? And she had “no idea how hard it could be for {him}?” Just think how hard it would be for YOU if you found out HE had a lover, and you’ll have a pretty good idea!

You’re changing a lot of the facts from earlier parts here. Nowhere was there any HINT of drugs, she knew EXACTLY what she was doing and believed it was the right thing to do. And Harry’s cock? It was described as being a LITTLE thicker than Victor’s, but otherwise not noticeably bigger. And there was never any mention of gang bangs.

@KarenE Re: Rim Job

Actually, I believe there WAS one reference to her giving Harry a rim job, though shit stains on her face weren't mentioned!

Second time through...

An interesting twist.

Sorry but I'm with Karen on this one

He watched that dvd many times, there was never a mention of any of this. And she invited him up for a nightcap, not the other way around. I guess this is just a different story. I can't wait till she tells the kids that she thought he would never find out. And what about all those emails over the years as well as them getting together at other times. I really expected better from this writer, but, it looks like he is forcing a RAAC here.

WHY DO THEY PUT REVELATIONS IN THE BACK OF THE BOOK

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I give up waiting for this to be finished.

Not buying it.

Too far off the original story and doesn't line up with why the stupid bitch kept her affair going via internet until her boss died.

The drug angle doesn't even make sense given the first three chapters.

Oh she was drugged.

She was drugged hundreds of miles away, years later, making masturbation videos for her lover with vegetables? Even worse than the original. Just preposterous.

Where the hell did the gang bang come from?

Glad that you took on the task of finishing this story; I had hope that someone would volunteer. However, In volume 1, Victor was graphic in his summary description of Vanessa's and Harry's sexploits, no mention of shit eating or gang bangs, which clearly would have made the top of his list. Maybe this is carried to far. Still, an interesting treatment.

Drugged or not, still a whore

Even after the first time, she should have come clean to her husband...she sucked and fucked her basturd boss in his office, at his house and went on trips with him. All the while lying to her husband. After 10 years, she kept lying...

Now its only laughable!!! MINUS 5*!!!

What a crap!!

Re-Reading

I probably have some repeats here!

“I never dreamed I'd be caught. I never imagined you'd find out. I had no idea how hard it could be for you, for me.” – So what if she WASN’T caught or found out? Would that make it right? She had no idea how hard it would be? How hard would it have been if things were reversed?

“worst of all he saw the gang bangs” – “Gang bangs?” Now that’s new!

I’m not liking the drug excuse. She voluntarily put herself in that situation, she herself never claimed to have not known what she was doing.

“Man it was huge” – Um, in the original story it was at most a little thicker, this is changing basic facts of the story.

As an Anon said, she wasn’t drugged when she Emailed compromising pictures and videos, not to mention the hints of meetings.

To finish a thought I mentioned last year, if she had admitted that she was wrong when first confronted, instead of trying to excuse/defend her actions, things might ha ended differently.

Hey carvohi, you should write a story about a bunch of concentration camp guards put on a war crimes trial for genocide, and how the female one was really innocent of all wrongdoing and was let off with a warning, since she had been drugged. After all, women aren't responsible for their actions, as we all know.