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Good grief...what am I missing with David? I still don't understand why he doesn't want a serious relationship with Ana. I read his reasons why but his heart is saying the opposite. Does he expect her to drop everything for him when he returns? I imagine Ana will shut her feelings off for David but when she sees him again they will all come flooding back and he will have her all twisted up again.
Ariesgirl,
I don't know if my plot is just that cliche or if you've got psychic abilities because you hit the nail right on the head. Of course, she won't make things easy on him, but that's why the title is Making it Work. ;)
This is sooooo GOOD!
I did not see this as an update, then I noticed that it was under the topic of Romance. Luckily for me I always check in with my fav writers and not just topics. Back to the story. This is a very well written, deeply emotional, intricate and well thought out story. As usual you pay attention to details and your writing is full, the characters, the plot - it just feels full and very real. I am sooo looking forward to see how this will unfold. I will check everyday until there is an update. :-)
Hair
Please don't have her cut her hair! Maybe dye but not cut!!!!!!!!!! Please do it for me
Please Update Soon
I luv this story.
So Painful..
This had me in tears, a bit too close to comfort.
I understand what David was doing and why but ... It Still is painful. Ana needed to purge and let go, holding on to that hurt would have caused an Even greater Hole further down the line. He Ripped of the bandaid quickly rather than slowly. :(
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