since it was Olivia who started the game with Victoria mom to seduce Victoria.
Victoria should finish it with the seduction of Olivia.
It should definitely be her
Although the emotional answer naturally is Victoria, the sadist in me says I would like to see Victoria and her Mom serving together.
Would love to see Victoria's plans fall apart and Olivia as the victor.
Make her crush that little slut Olivia into submission -- a grand finale where they all pleasure Victoria's holes.
It's about time you got back to this story, please just finish it before a year goes by. She should win as she is the bigger dom then Olivia and has Olivia's mom and her friend as her slaves and she can get their daughter’s to be her slaves too and that would give her five sluts to use.
Although it would seem right for Victoria to make Olivia her sex slave, Victoria is the one showing submissive tendencies so she will submit to Olivia. Unless, neither one submits and they are both Mistresses to their mothers, June, Becka, and Katrina who submits to Victoria.
I would love to see victoria win... but why not right both one where vic wins another where olivian wins..... I mean really come on who doesnt think of this XD
To have Olivia win after all the build up would be anticlimatic. Victoria will prove in the end to be stronger and it would really be erotic to make Olivia service not only Victoria's mom, but Olivia's mom and all the others who Olivia dominated for so long. The story would be great having Victoria totally dominate and humiliate Olivia for several chapters. Like having Olivia suck Victoria's toes at school in front of the Cheerleaders. Having Olivia lick Olivia's mom's ass in front of Victoria's mom, etc. There are many great possibilities for extended chapters.
If you had Olivia win, then I believe the story would abruptly end there, no more to tell. So decide.
Your writing is great!!!
Victoria shows a greater understanding of the submissive nature an would-be a better Dom for it.
Victoria should because she seems to be the better dom glade you got back to some older stories hope you can finish this one out and add some more story lines to
A Perfect Fall that's the story I can't wait to finish but this ones great to all your stories are the best I have read about interracial lesbians kept up the good work but please get back to some of the other stories that we loyal fans are waiting for
I think victoria should win. So as to teach olivia a lesson of how to feel being a submissive slut.
I'm a sucker for when the good guy wins
As in days of old when Victoria was Queen of the British Relm, our modern Victory has conquered and should dominate as The Mistress over all! Hip, hip hooray! Hip, hip hooray! Hip, hip hooray!
Bring Olivia to her knees licking the queenly cunt!
Hip, hip hooray! Hip, hip hooray! Hip, hip hooray!
It's 'roger', not 'rodger'; 'bugger' is only ever used to mean 'sodomise' or, as you so delicately put it, 'arse fuck'; and the English say 'fuck' more often than 'shag.'
Your research is dire and, anyway, I don't think you can write.
I like Victoria, Olivia does not deserve to win
....Victoria! Bitches like Olivia should be knocked down a peg or two. Olivia seems to think that she is untouchable, but, she needs to learn that she's not.
Put Octavia through as much humiliation as possible. Lord knows the bitch deserves it.
I think Victoria should win.
another great story, Victoria should win, after all its her story.
Olivia needs to taken down, and maybe even made to be submissive to the others as well
Victoria to win that's for sure silk!
Olivia should definitely end up on her knees. And since I hated the snobby bitches in school, I hope she ends up being the beta bitch. The lowest wrung on the sub ladder if you will. Plus I feel that theres potential for more stories if Victoria wins. Hope to see your decision soon!
I disagree with previous comments. I think Olivia must win. I have not seen a weakness in Olivia, but Victoria clearly has a submissive streak. If Victoria wins, the story is very obvious since we have seen all her thoughts. However, Olivia might bring some unexpected surprisses. I would love to see Victoria completly dommed and her thoughts in the process.
I'm not knocking the story, but you've got so many characters, using so many names, it's getting a bit confusing. I'm considering using some kind of roster to keep track of who's who. You may have to provide a cast list at the beginning of each chapter in this series.
It may be too much to ask but it would be great to see two stories; one with Victoria dominating Olivia and another story with Victoria crawling between Olivia's legs.
I'd love to see Olivia crawling to Victoria's opened legs & eat out her cunt like a good slut should, (put the bitch in her place lol) I think if Victoria was to win the story can continue a bit longer. she would have 6 sluts to her disposal: Olivia, Katrina, June, Lauren, her mother, & Becka. PLEASE HAVE VICTORIA WIN. and continue the series sooner then alot later. thank u. :)
definately have to go with victoria to save her mothe
Something about Olivia really annoys me more than most antagonists. I would love to see her put in her place.
Great story can't wait un til Victoria wins
Victoria to win.
Actually a tough call, it could go major hot either way. I guess if I have to chose it would be Victoria since we have seen more of her. If you have Olivia win you will have to do some stories about women she has seduced.
Is there a way they can both win? A tie maybe and then they team up to tear a swath through the women of their town. Think about it.
Olivia must win
dear god let this young sultry English mistress win as well as make olivia and Kat become her personal pets
Its pretty clear the majority want it to end with Victoria as the HBIN (Head Bitch In Charge). But I say you should write the story making who you prefer the winner, but throw in some twists with it!
Olivia should be taken down a peg or two!!!
Came across this series just before this story posted. I'm HOOKED!! Can't wait for the finale. Possible twist where both girls play dom/sub role to each other while mainting dom roles they already have in place. Again, OUTSTANDING!!
Yes this sexy domme should win. With Olivia as her personal pet and becka her new gf.
I say let Victoria win and make both Olivia and Kat her subs!!
Let victor,is win
Olivia sub to all
Victoria wins. 'Nuf said.
Why not let Katrina or the brainy girl win?
Wouldn't that be the best ending?
All the popular and rich bitches submitting to the valedictorian?
Victoria. Olivia needs someone to put her in her place. Victoria should win.
I would like to see Victoria Win.
you should make two endings one were Victoria is the victor and an alternate were Olivia is the victor.
you could have some really good plot points in both stories the one where Victoria wins could involve Olivia being betrayed by her close friend Katrina when she finds out her mother is a submissive lesbian slut and helps victory to dominate Olivia in the most erotically sweet revenge ever.
as for the one were Olivia is the victor you could have Victorias mother betray her on this day when she's being ruthlessly fucked by the two teens she unintentionally says her daughter name in the throws of passion and is ordered to explain more of the "seduction" of her when she spills the beans revealing her daughters plans thus ruining any chances Victoria had of success
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Olivia should win definately
Victoria without a doubt (and us being English has nothing to do with our vote).
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