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Excellent read
I have enjoyed reading this story, and am looking forward to the next chapters. I like your style woomanone. I think the details are quite good and believable. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Keep going
with the western stories. I love them.
Pete
Excellent writing
Dad seems to want to separate his daughter from Zachary as quick as possible, but that may be just his manner of speaking and acting... English, you know?
Love your storie
as always.
Only thing I really noticed wrong was when he handed her his Colt. He told her it was a single shot but the description sounds like a single action revolver. A minor thing.
Just found this series.
It's very good. I like the use of 'supper' instead of 'lunch' as the midday meal. Evening meals were always dinner in my grandparents' houses. Breakfast, supper, dinner was the daily progression.
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