All Comments on 'French Maid'

great story will done

Terrific story...sexy and very hot!

This matches with my wife's & my real life experience.She enjoyed it a lot....as it reflects her sexual adventures! when i eat her lover's cock-cream from her freshly-fucked pussy....she gets multiple orgasms....this story heated her up !!! keep it up man! we Indians need such stories too....

A Wife's realization of true Female Superiority in life, is always a wonderful story, especially when she gets to mock her husband while being in total control of both him, and another man.

she should be able to do anyone, and have to her...

w/o him. he walks out, one hopes.

Obviously this is a story written by a queer that gets of off being the submissive.

Started good then got stupid.

A nice original twist, the first part. The secret phone conversation with mark was also a good strategy. After Mark shows up, it gets kind of weird and not very believable. I suggest re-formatting the story to get accurate quoting of conversation. The way it's written makes it kind of hard to follow.

Why would this be his position? Either she leaves or he leaves. Why would he put up with the humiliation? It makes no sense. You need to rethink this ending.

And I would ask her if she was sure she wanted him. If her answer was yes-I would kill him and leave her crying. Fuck the bitch.

yes my girl friend did that to me i was told to put on the maid dress and to clean the house i did as told when she came home she had four bags here my dear girl put them on the bed and come to bath room when i got there i was told to get undress she had the tub fill with bubble bath then she put some cream on me she put a bath cap on my head she wash me and then i got out i saw all the hair in the tub you can clean the tub later then we went to the bed room she open the bags there were bras panties nylons dresses high heels she put a bra on and then panties then she painted my toe nails red then she did my make up then she put the nylon on my legs then came the dress now she show me a mirror i look like a girl then she hand me some bras and panties you can put them in your dresser and hang up your dress and blouse i open the coscet all my male clothes were gone girls do not wear male clothes i told her i am a male you were a male now you are my girl bitch and when i done you beg me to to make you my bitch well after five month my breasts has grow and i told her please make me your bitch she ask are you sure i said yes then she ripe my panties off and bend me over a chair my dear this is what i been waiting for she open her robe i saw a big strap-on cock she put some cream on it and then on my ass hole she shove two finger in and out next came her cock it hurt a bit soon i was backing in to her i told her yes shove that cock in me hard then she ask are you my bitch i said yes i am your bitch well after a year i now a sissy girl maid

well here my story i work for a older lady doing thing around the house then one day it start to rain it rain all week we were in the house she ask since you can not work outside how would you like to help me clean up the place i said yes you mean you be will to do house work i said as a joke it will be fun just think i going to be a house wife its to bad am knot a girl she just smile well let get started here you can wash the dishes as a joke do i get to wear a apron no i think i have some better she went to her room and brought out a dress he you want to be a house wife you should dress the part i look at the dress what no bra or panties then she grab my hand we went to a room take your clothes off she found some bra panties here i put this bra do you want me out so you can dress i said no i may need help with the dress i pull my underwear off and put the panties and dress and she hook the dress up she show me a full mirror i look like a little girl she told me you look very nice dress as a girl well we clean house all day i even wash her laundry by hand at supper time i learn how to make it then i clean up after after supper she ask me if she could do my toe nails i said why not i pull my sock off well that will not do you can not wear man socks after i do your toe nails i have some nylons you can have to wear well she painted my nails pink and the she show me how to put them on they felt really soft it was late now she told me it was bed time so i went to my room and on the bed was a baby blue nightie and a note i hope you like it and wear it to bed i toke my dress and the panties bra nylon off and put on the nightie it came down to my ass and i could see the top of my little man breasts i craw into bed she came in and ask did you wear the nightie i told her yes that a girl then she walk over and kiss me good night and said here take this it help you sleep like a girl i toke the two pills and lay back down she came over and pull the cover back a bit girl do not hide there breasts under cover well early in the morning i heard her come in she was in a black robe i just lay there to see what she do i had my eye close and there were a other lady with here look dear he will make a good sissy wife yes as long as you keep him in women clothes then i hear her said i like to shove my dido cock up that pussy ass hole when i hear that i move a bit and turn over my nightie came up a little the other lady said look she not in panties what a lovey ass he has then i talk in my sleep i love my nightie i just hope i get to wear girl clothes in the morning i move my hand down to my ass and a finger touch my ass hole i heard them said look you think he going to finger his as hole the i said i wish i had a cock in there well after that my hand was move away i felt her hand on my ass she told the other lady look she just lift his ass look you got the strap -on yes so do i why not go to his lips and see how you can make him suck it and i try to shove this one in his ass hole well it was not long i had two cock in me after a while she pull out of my mouth and i said please do not stop then one said you like that yes i did do you want my girl friend cock yes if i do this you will become are house bitch and wear the clothes you now have yes then i saw it her girlfriend was a she male and now i am there house bitch

one day i had to rent a room i got one for a older male he live in a big house he told me how much the rent was and then said if i help around here the rent would be free i told yes i will help out i move in that day there was a note you can wash the dishes and mop the floor there milk if you want some well i put my clothes away i went and did the dishes and mop the floor well after that i had a nap when i got up he was home well i see you did what i ask for once i told him i did knot mine i like to do house work well after that he had me washing his clothes so one day as a joke i found a nightie and put it on and wash his under wear he came in what is this and why are you in my wife old nightie i told him i found it and for a joke i put it one since i do the house work for you sir do you want me to take it off i did not let him said any thing i pull my nightie off i was just in panties now then i hand him the nightie he just look at me and walk over and slip the nightie over my head no i think like you in a nightie well after that night i went to bed i had a shower and put on a baby blue short nightie and then got in to bed it was late when i heard the bedroom door open up i did not move when he pull back the cover he look at me and then he put his hand on my chest and then i felt him pinch my nipples and then he lift my nightie up and rub my breasts it felt good i came out with that feel good then as i said would you like to suck my tits sir and that when he put his mouth on them suck yes that feel good as he suck my hand went down to his cock and i jerk it a bit then he stop sucking now how about sucking my cock girl he brought his cock up to my mouth and i open up and he shove it in i suck his cock yes girl suck my cock then he pull out and he came all over my face he hand me a wash towel and told me to clean my face up i did as told then i pull the cover over and he got in i craw up beside him and kiss my first man he told me you will be my house bitch and after that night i did become his bitch and i love the way it turn out i no longer wear male clothes they do not look nice on me i have grow breasts and i love the way he teat me like a sissy girl

Beyond stupid

I simply didn't believe that this could or would happen. Given what they're doing, no one answers the door. Let whoever is there go away. Then you want us to believe that his wife conspires with a man her husband hates? That's just stupid. And when she tells her husband what she has planned? Hubby looks her in her eyes and tells her to choose right now. Either Mark leaves or I do and if you choose Mark plan on being divorced. It's one thing to have a fantasy. It's another thing completely to have your wife, without talking to him about it, she's about to get herself a divorce. The rest was bullshit. If Mark is really lucky Jamie doesn't get his gun and blow a big hole in Mark. Your conclusion that he would be in that position often is ludicrous. When Jamie informs both sets of parents and all their friends what she did, she's gonna get ridden out of town on a rail. Even for fiction this was just stupid.

1 star

Really bad

duh - dumb story written by an illiterate person

Did she enjoy her divorce? What a cunt. What a stupid story.

Woefully awful.