Laelia Ch. 01

MORE!!

Please don't make the readers wait too long for the next installment. MORE!

Thumbs up!

I also look forward to additional chapters and additional "smuttiness" sounds appropriate with such a lovely slave. Please post the next scene quickly.

Good start, could go a lot of places with this. Thank you.

Good chapter

Looking forward to the next installment when you crank the smittiness up to an 11!

Mmmmm the tension!!

I really love this story so far. Very descriptive and very hot. Please post more chapters soon!! I hope he starts to see her as more than just a slave :)

loved it

Id love to see where this goes, he is holding back so much not to just shove himself inside her virgin pussy and it makes it so good, i am super turned on and the writing was awesome keep up the good work

Nice start...

(And, by the way, a good job with the paragraphing. It is often underestimated how important this factor is for the readability of an online text.)

Nicely done!

For your first submission, it is very well written. I look forward to more!

Good but...

It's a good story from a writing point of view, there are just a few historical things that get me when I read it, maybe read up a little on roman history if you haven't already done so otherwise, keep it up.

Very very good

Thanks for writing and sharing

loved it

plase don´t stop

Your comments/feedback = awesomesauce

I just wanted to say thanks for all the feedback! I'm reading as much as I can get my hands on about Ancient Rome. I've put in the 3rd chapter yesterday and I started the 4th chapter today. :)

Thanks for the update .....

Looking forward to chapter 3. The things that Julian can do Laelia in ancient Rome .... The possibilities are endless .....

Love it.

So hot.