All Comments on 'Laelia Ch. 01'

by digital_bath

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
MORE!!

Please don't make the readers wait too long for the next installment. MORE!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Thumbs up!

I also look forward to additional chapters and additional "smuttiness" sounds appropriate with such a lovely slave. Please post the next scene quickly.

MaynessMaynessalmost 11 years ago

Good start, could go a lot of places with this. Thank you.

inspector123inspector123almost 11 years ago
Good chapter

Looking forward to the next installment when you crank the smittiness up to an 11!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Mmmmm the tension!!

I really love this story so far. Very descriptive and very hot. Please post more chapters soon!! I hope he starts to see her as more than just a slave :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
loved it

Id love to see where this goes, he is holding back so much not to just shove himself inside her virgin pussy and it makes it so good, i am super turned on and the writing was awesome keep up the good work

ViperVenomViperVenomalmost 11 years ago

Nice start...

(And, by the way, a good job with the paragraphing. It is often underestimated how important this factor is for the readability of an online text.)

VelvetViseVelvetVisealmost 11 years ago
Nicely done!

For your first submission, it is very well written. I look forward to more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Good but...

It's a good story from a writing point of view, there are just a few historical things that get me when I read it, maybe read up a little on roman history if you haven't already done so otherwise, keep it up.

RebellRebellalmost 11 years ago
Very very good

Thanks for writing and sharing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
loved it

plase donĀ“t stop

digital_bathdigital_bathalmost 11 years agoAuthor
Your comments/feedback = awesomesauce

I just wanted to say thanks for all the feedback! I'm reading as much as I can get my hands on about Ancient Rome. I've put in the 3rd chapter yesterday and I started the 4th chapter today. :)

inspector123inspector123almost 11 years ago
Thanks for the update .....

Looking forward to chapter 3. The things that Julian can do Laelia in ancient Rome .... The possibilities are endless .....

MoonlightSonataMoonlightSonataover 7 years ago
I love this!!!

I would love to attend to him!

Horseman68Horseman68over 7 years ago
Great Beginning.

Hope this plays out to it's full potential. We will see; so many do not.

Horseman68Horseman68about 7 years ago
Warning: Abandoned Story!

This story is abandoned. Disregard my previous comment and do not waste your time on this story or it's author, who could not care less about her readers.

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