All Comments on 'Jimmy Cuck Ch. 02'

Totally unnecessary! Gave your story a slow start to a heated chapter 1 ending. Chapter 2 was really just beginning to heat up when you closed it out. Too bad. I was really getting into you story. Now chapter 3 is going to have to be boiling HOT to sell the whole story. Good luck

hot, very hot, perfect pace, don't listen to the critics, keep writing, very sexy love

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My little penis is so hard hopefully Mistress will allow me to ejaculate soon.

You need a grammar lesson - it should be "Jesse even encouraged Ashley and me to play around.." - and "more vague detail" is surely nonsense.

Also, who the hell is "Megan"?

Love your story..kept my little dick hard.

Looking forward to more!

Forget the stupid grammar lessons; keep writing.

You're close. Certainly on the right path.

Plz continue ur story it's so hot n kept me hard all day

So don't stop writing. I loved it, I'm male age 60 near Boston. Just letting you know what age your story appeals to.

I liked the idea and just wondering why you didn't follow up. I hope it wasn't due to negative comments because they happen regardless of how good the story is. There were a few mistakes but these harpers on small errors overlook the bigger picture. Beats me but that's their nature I guess. Would love to read more and encourage you to come back to it and see how it goes.

Sorry life has been busy I'll hopefully update with a story later this year and want to find an editor

I read these stories to try get into the mind of a willing cuckold I haven't managed it as yet.

I wouldn't be very pleased with my wife if she let anyone's cock into her vagina where only mine should only go, she would be toast.

Actually wanting another to be with your wife. I don't get it....