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by Anonymous

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by Ashesh905/14/13

an Epic

Dragon Chronicles retold !! Favourited & 5-ed !

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by HarryHill05/14/13

Was quite engrossed with the love story until around stanza 19

then my attention wandered. But, I thought those first 19 were exceptional, well worth a 5. Made my morning.

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by todski2805/18/13

Amazing

Totally engrossed me in the details. Thanks for sharing

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