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Clever last line
Excellent story, but the clever last line of dialog was a real contest winner. Hope you find a "last line contest" to enter. This one is definitely a winner, written from her POV.
Why not write a sequel, starting from his POV, then expand the story with a stop in the woods enroute home and a hot scene in the back seat. She asked for an encore, didn't she? So, how can Ray refuse her invitation?
The uathor's best piece yet
title says it all - a problem with "first time" stories like this is that while they are often very good stroke stories, they lack a back story, and so often it is the back story which is the most interesting and erotic of a seduction, rather than its final consumation
Excellent, as usual...
None of your stories disappoint. I love the twists and last liners that you often include.
You led me astray.
I was starting to arc up at the impending non-consent/rape and then Teresa came of age. Wasn't she lucky her first suited her so well.
Good job Ashson.
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