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Ghost Love

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by Anonymous

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by erectus12305/15/13

well done, nicely erotic

hope it is a ghost!
nice lines:
"That spot you knew so well
That would always make my pleasure swell"

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by HarryHill05/15/13

This is well written/cadenced

Liked the rhymes. wish you hadn't used presence twice in the last few lines

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