All Comments on 'Letting Go Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
*****

I liked it. Something sweet and innocent about it.

Five, for a good start.

CoCoNiy101CoCoNiy101almost 11 years ago
Aw

This was so sweet. Looking forward to more 👍👏

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
OMG!

This story is so freakin cute! I hope you plan on updating SOON. I don't think Chris is going to let Sara, pull away from him. This is going to be fun to read!

QuietmahoganystormQuietmahoganystormalmost 11 years ago
*****

Great first submission! I would love to see more on this couple.

ariesgirlariesgirlalmost 11 years ago

I hope Michael tells Louise of Chris' intentions towards Sara. Sara likes Louise so she may look to her for advice about Chris.

hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyalmost 11 years ago

Great start, I can't wait to see here it all leads.

TiffybsweetieTiffybsweetiealmost 11 years ago
Cute

Very good start! I'm looking forward to what you have in store for these two.

peekingduckpeekingduckalmost 11 years ago
swee

I think you are off to a great start and I think I am going to really like Sara and Chris. There were a few editing issues, I must admit ,but nothing too big. Nice work for a n00b.

brazen1988brazen1988almost 11 years ago
super cute!!!

i love this!!!

IronDragonIronDragonalmost 11 years ago
Excellent first effort!

I'm loving the tale so far. Great work. 5 big stars! :)

brownskinnedcutiebrownskinnedcutiealmost 11 years ago
I give this story two thumbs up!!!

Most excellent!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Nice

What a lovely story; thanks so much for sharing it.

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmalmost 11 years ago
Lovely and romantic

I totally felt her anguish. One never gets over the awkward

moments in one's life and certainly remembers the pain.

There was great sensitivity reflected in this story. Thanks for

sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Caught my attention.

For some reason I could never read this.BUT I am glad I did.

GenicoGenicoover 10 years ago
Great story

I'm hooked. I can't wait to read more. I love the premis and the layout, but I must admit I prefer a bit more descriptive filler between sceens.

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