Letting Go Ch. 01

*****

I liked it. Something sweet and innocent about it.

Five, for a good start.

Aw

This was so sweet. Looking forward to more 👍👏

OMG!

This story is so freakin cute! I hope you plan on updating SOON. I don't think Chris is going to let Sara, pull away from him. This is going to be fun to read!

*****

Great first submission! I would love to see more on this couple.

I hope Michael tells Louise of Chris' intentions towards Sara. Sara likes Louise so she may look to her for advice about Chris.

Great start, I can't wait to see here it all leads.

Cute

Very good start! I'm looking forward to what you have in store for these two.

swee

I think you are off to a great start and I think I am going to really like Sara and Chris. There were a few editing issues, I must admit ,but nothing too big. Nice work for a n00b.

super cute!!!

i love this!!!

Excellent first effort!

I'm loving the tale so far. Great work. 5 big stars! :)

I give this story two thumbs up!!!

Most excellent!!

Nice

What a lovely story; thanks so much for sharing it.

Lovely and romantic

I totally felt her anguish. One never gets over the awkward
moments in one's life and certainly remembers the pain.
There was great sensitivity reflected in this story. Thanks for
sharing.

Caught my attention.

For some reason I could never read this.BUT I am glad I did.

Great story

I'm hooked. I can't wait to read more. I love the premis and the layout, but I must admit I prefer a bit more descriptive filler between sceens.