Made in Thailand

Great Story

The only thing is that her age should be made a little younger, so that her getting pregnant will seem easier to understand. great story and I hope she is, they would make a great couple.

more please

Please writ more

Trite and unconvincing

below average

everything has been happen too fast between mother and son. not much conversation between mom son also. you should describe more about their trip and incest.
make sure that in your next mother son story.

Bloody awful.

What if she gets pregnant?

Well if that first time doesn't do it, he'll just have to keep banging her till she does.

Next chapter

Can't wait to read more of this story.

Not good

Not a good story, no build up nothing.

Editing

While a minor thing, some of the syntax and spelling could be improved to help the story flow.

Gutless

I hate anonymous comments it doesn't really seem fair, the author can't make a fair rebuttal. You can at least leave a contact name, gutless scum.

lovely story

what a fantastic story,quick and you cant stop reading till it is finished,congats to you for writing such a fine story,please keep it up.

Screwing his own mother!

Wow! fantastic story. I loved it when they french kissed and the son took his mom's bra off. Mother let her own son screw her and he shot his huge load of sperm seed deep inside his mom! I think that is the ultimate sex for a man filling his own mother's pussy with sperm!!!

The story seems to be good but the start is so short.

Just when we got to the good part, the chapter was over.

With such a basic and obvious grammatical mistake in the first sentence

I couldn't read any more. One.

OK But.....

OK story, but what was the rush?

too fast

beautiful story but slow down man

Artisitc license?

"At the age of 48, Mary's body was still firm and supple." And, "What if I get pregnant," she sobbed quietly."

Certainly firm and supple is possible but at 48, she is done with baby-making, or she would be a rare medical exception. Small facts that are ignored for the sake of a story. And as mentioned before, what was the rush to finish the story.

a great story, hot and exciting, but...

I'm so tired of mrpervy46 and his idiotic complaints about anonymous commenters. Hey, mr. p, why not tell us in which city's phonebook or voter registration list we can look you up under your "non-anonymous" moniker. What a pompous fool.

mmm best story

I hope you make a part too to this story this was so dam hot. I want to read more.
thanks its was a good read

Very good. Look forward to more. Just reading it made me ejaculate

Part 2 needed

If ever a story is crying out for part 2 , then this is the one

Part 2

This needs a part 2

part any time now....

This story is jx arching with the need of part two

rape

I know about rape. Even if her body and mind eventually betrayed her, her thinking mind was screaming 'No'. She tried to say 'No, don't do this'. But he didn't stop. She said, "don't cum inside me', but he rashly, foolishly, and thoughtlessly did anyway. He took away her right to say "No" to whoever what about being a sexual partner. This is garbage. I use no foul language or expressions of hate, but you are writing about something you know nothing about obviously. People will read this and think it is ok since it is on the internet.