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erectus123erectus123almost 11 years agoAuthor
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AngelineAngelinealmost 11 years ago
Excellent work

You really should try to publish these as a book. They're very good and, taken together, a rather amazing story of one person's sexual journey. I don't think I've seen anything quite like it. I've done erotic poem series here but this is different: poetic and yet reportorial, forthright and graphic without sounding like a porn script. That's really difficult to achieve imo. I've been here at Lit a long time and rarely even read erotic poetry here anymore because most of it is such crap. But you have something very special here. It's pretty clear you are a writer.

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 Personal Bio Notes: I was born in Belfast, passing through my dear mother's loins, and that is where I find most comfort, passing through with other women, not my mother. I survived through the years of Irish troubles and immigrated to the USA after various family tragedies...

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