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The Gold Bikini Club Ch. 03

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by ken philips05/20/13

This series has built up so nicely. I am very much looking forward to the next installment. Pls keep it nice for James tho - he is such a good lad. Ken

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by Anonymous05/20/13

Thank you '601

I am commenting BEFORE I actually read installment 3. Partly because of the usual self appointed critics and judges of just what constitutes good storytelling. I am sure that this will be worth the wait. There have been other memorable stories that never made it past a 1 or 2 chapter development that are absolutely incredible. I am well versed in spelling and passable in grammar skills. Some racists use critiques of spelling and usage as a sort of back door to mask what they really mean. I get the argument that it can be construed as reverse racism, i.e. thinking of black men as mere pieces of meat, but that conveniently overlooks historical power relationships in the 'northern' developed countries. In the early history of the USA, there were laws passed forbidding marriage between whites and indians/native Americans. The elites did not want lower class whites 'going native'. Sexuality is just one component of the life experience. Hanging on to outdated taboos and mores serves no one. So, again, thank you 601. Keep that bbc hotwife white cuckold buffet 'cummin'! And final parting shot at the 'real men', Not every white man who gets off on this shit is a sissy. In fact imo, the more conventional, i.e. masculine a cuckold male is, the sweeter the coconut cream pie tastes.

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by Anonymous05/20/13

Absolutely love it

keep it going, please. I am totally jealous of Rebecca, I can only imagine that its me.

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by MaitrePol05/20/13

Super

Wow I can't wait to read the next part.

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by cheryl_4fun05/21/13

yes

oh yes i am getting a gold bikini tomorrown and wearing it evry time i go swimming no telling how much black cock i will get yummme

and i want all i can take

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by james_3867105/21/13

SEXY

almost like me and wife on first time with her getting black cock but there ws no gold bikini , but sound like a great place for us to go we bothlove black cock and seeing her take it is so hot for me

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by Anonymous05/21/13

Fantastic

We can`t wait for the next chapter. Wery well written,and a good script.

I`m ready for a gold bikini my self!

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by cuckyboyjoe05/21/13

Amazing

Simply amazing, I have never had a story make me this horny. I wish I could be in James' place. Can't wait for part 4.

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by Anonymous05/22/13

More more more

Love the story -great concept............where will it go?

Next instalment please...soon

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by Anonymous06/13/13

More please!

It's been nearly a month, hopefully we will see more of this story soon. It's amazing!

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by Anonymous06/24/13

Great story

cant wait for the next installment. Please keep them coming!!

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by Anonymous07/26/13

Alas another incomplete promise!

What a fantastic story! But alas, yet another one seemingly destined to remain incomplete. What a pity!

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by Anonymous07/30/13

Please continue writing

I can't wait for the next part

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by devilspy200108/18/13

Please say there is more.

There has to be more. Please, please don't keep us waiting.

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by Anonymous09/01/13

Outstanding

i thought all four chapters have been outstanding

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