All Comments on 'A Goddess on Earth'

Great storie hope to read more about thme

Hi thank you for writing, its a great story with good pacing. You also included a nice moral message in porn! You have achieved what few can with this one :)

I enjoyed your story very much...

I could relate to the feelings and the eroticism.

Nice.....

Hope we get to read more about the Youngs.

...But very well written as well, the storyline and dialog flowed nicely. You couldn't always anticipate which way the plot would go, which I think makes for a good read. And of course it made a wonderful morality story, the emotions were all described pretty well, but it also had a remarkably erotic affirmation of their new found love for each other that was... just plain hot! Definitely a 5 star fav! -- Because the author asked readers to not judge the story by the spelling and grammer, I didn't. But I do think, that for this story especially, it would have been worth the extra time to pass it by an volunteer editor.

pretty good story, enjoyed the read very much.

it was quite a good build up, a whirlpool of all kinds of emotions and the sex was as hot as i'm used to, which is pretty fucking great.

all in all once again a great piece of porn, i hope you'll keep writing for a very long time :)

Great opening. Well-written. The build up to the climax was great.

I absolutely loved it. I always wanted a story like this one. Where a fan gets to meet a famous singer and they go at it in back stage. Please make it into a series. I love to see where their relationship goes from here. Thank you.

I kinda prefer tgirl stories from the PoV of the fuckee but it was good enough to "serve its purpose."

Keep up the good work, and continue Caged Ladybird ASAP! :D

you're my favorite author on here, and i think this was one of your best stories. the buildup and back story was great, and it made the sexual encounter that much sweeter. amazing work! also, i agree with the other comment, i hope you continue Caged Bird asap!

I loved this story. The characters were believable and the way they got together and had sex was not contrived but a natural way for the story to go which made it really arousing to read. Thankyou for this, and your other stories.

Every time I read these types of stories from you, I end up humping the bed and wanting my vibrator. I love you

A very touching and heartfelt story. Also, well written. Stories like this are always

meaningful, and always needed. There is always hope for everybody.

we need more good stories like this. the emotion and all the themes here were great

make a part 2. even if this story came out in 2013 pls. make it a series.

A very sensual story that kept me hard and leaking precum as I slowly massaged my cock while reading this story and I look forward to reading more of your stories.

I love how you make the interactions so intimate and caring

great story. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you