Very Solid Vignette about Gradual Displacement of Heart, Soul & Body
The subtle disses are starting to creep into the plot. Ricky is angling for solo time with Jenn. Michael seems unphased. Ostensibly he claims that he's in love but his actions are not congruent with that sentiment.
I enjoyed the little tells and psychological nuggets that xieglover has strewn especially generously in this segment. Full fool marks.
Well, you have led us to the point where the marriage begins to end and he is replaced by Ricky....he let's his lust overcome his common sense and as a result the FWB becomes a crush which becomes love which ends the marriage....pretty sad, but given how he is driven by his fantasy it is pretty predictable.
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Anonymous05/20/13
Keep writing!
Its great to have a cuckold story that doesn't forget about the emotions involved. It makes the sex much hotter! Please don't give in to the temptation for a revenge scenario or the overblown orgy scenario-stay with the developing relationship (sexual and emotional) between Jen and Ricky, and the way that impacts Jen and Mike. How do they talk to each other about it? How do their relationships change? Do any of them try to resist the direction they are going, only to be pulled back by the other two (or their own desires?)
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Anonymous05/20/13
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Sorry, these are plastic, stupid, unlikeable people, not worth reading.
Jen will totally fall in love with Ricky. I hope she leaves her husband. Xlegolover has written many stories with this scenario now I wonder why would he do something different.
Sweetie is starting to get worried about her marriage and probably about Hubby's obsession with her relationship with her Bull! On that hand, she senses trouble in a relationship with Hubby to which she has committed herself. On the OTHER hand, she recognizes that she finds her sexual pleasure vastly more satisfying with her Bull! She is NOT in control of the first problem (and it is a gradual and insidious problem!) She IS in control of the second problem (and it is immediate, gratifying and powerful!)
Most commenters who are not reflexively condemning Hubby, Sweetie and XLegLover recognize that things will spiral downhill rapidly unless Hubby gets his head out of his ass (and Bull's pecker out of Sweetie!) This is a great accounting of the exquisite pleasure/pain of scratching a pesky itch, knowing that you are INCREASING the irritation (and need to scratch more and harder) you will feel in a few minutes!
I have a story plan about a cuckold pair with a bastard children. The story POV would be from the bastard son's. The son would tell, how he guessed his parents are cuckold married pair.............when he was 18 years old......
BTW The son was brought up sexual majority man by his mother........and he will remain sexual majority husband in the story.......My plan is not in the near future................Perhaps 2-3-4 years later.
English
more!
maybe the new standard in this genre...
New standard?
Nonsense. Way too many cucks on this site.
Very Solid Vignette about Gradual Displacement of Heart, Soul & Body
The subtle disses are starting to creep into the plot. Ricky is angling for solo time with Jenn. Michael seems unphased. Ostensibly he claims that he's in love but his actions are not congruent with that sentiment.
I enjoyed the little tells and psychological nuggets that xieglover has strewn especially generously in this segment. Full fool marks.
Beginning of the End
Well, you have led us to the point where the marriage begins to end and he is replaced by Ricky....he let's his lust overcome his common sense and as a result the FWB becomes a crush which becomes love which ends the marriage....pretty sad, but given how he is driven by his fantasy it is pretty predictable.
Keep writing!
Its great to have a cuckold story that doesn't forget about the emotions involved. It makes the sex much hotter! Please don't give in to the temptation for a revenge scenario or the overblown orgy scenario-stay with the developing relationship (sexual and emotional) between Jen and Ricky, and the way that impacts Jen and Mike. How do they talk to each other about it? How do their relationships change? Do any of them try to resist the direction they are going, only to be pulled back by the other two (or their own desires?)
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Sorry, these are plastic, stupid, unlikeable people, not worth reading.
Excellent story! Can't wait to read more. Please have jen and ricky seriously dating but jen still keeps a deep love and commitment to mike.
Fantastic story!!!!!
Excellent story, thanks ;-)
Please, continue soon
Great!
You are heading down a great path!!! I love that it is not mean spirited... and the latest dating/feelings angle is outstanding! Keep it up!
Well done
Keep it up, I am waiting for the next installment.
more please sir
though I love a happy ending & can't see one here, this is so hot in it's own sick way...
Dad
Ricky should get Jen pregnant and Mike should know it and want it.
Oh please this is well going that way.
Jen will totally fall in love with Ricky. I hope she leaves her husband. Xlegolover has written many stories with this scenario now I wonder why would he do something different.
NEXT!
Sixth verse NOT same as Fifth
Sweetie is starting to get worried about her marriage and probably about Hubby's obsession with her relationship with her Bull! On that hand, she senses trouble in a relationship with Hubby to which she has committed herself. On the OTHER hand, she recognizes that she finds her sexual pleasure vastly more satisfying with her Bull! She is NOT in control of the first problem (and it is a gradual and insidious problem!) She IS in control of the second problem (and it is immediate, gratifying and powerful!)
Most commenters who are not reflexively condemning Hubby, Sweetie and XLegLover recognize that things will spiral downhill rapidly unless Hubby gets his head out of his ass (and Bull's pecker out of Sweetie!) This is a great accounting of the exquisite pleasure/pain of scratching a pesky itch, knowing that you are INCREASING the irritation (and need to scratch more and harder) you will feel in a few minutes!
5*
Same dog shit by a very talented faggot....
Horse shit as usual
Fabulous Stuff
Like many of the other commenters on here, I'm hoping that Ricky gets Jen pregnant
Sexual majority son
I have a story plan about a cuckold pair with a bastard children. The story POV would be from the bastard son's. The son would tell, how he guessed his parents are cuckold married pair.............when he was 18 years old......
BTW The son was brought up sexual majority man by his mother........and he will remain sexual majority husband in the story.......My plan is not in the near future................Perhaps 2-3-4 years later.
Idiot
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