All Comments on 'A Almost Perfect Awakening Ch. 19-21'

ive read all of ur work, and the good thing about u is that u put so much different things in one whole story. I really love ur work

Nice one mate!

This piece is amazing, I just recently lost my virginity, and ironically is was with my best friends twin brother. You did a wonderful job on capturing the essence of their first time, again, amazing job.

WOW!! LOVED IT ALL! i had planned to vote sooner but,became enthralled in your work and just couldn't wait to get to the next chapter...sorry about that. But this is a wonderful story and i love how you play back and forth with the brain reactions to you talking back to the brain...just enough humor to make it all the more interesting without breaking the spell of the story...i will continue to read on..Thank you Sir, for sharing with your fans and please continue on, a fan in Texas

The suspence was killing me! I'm 57 now, but remember my first time esconced within the velvet paradice of a womans vagina. I'm hoping my eventual demise will be something like that. A mindlessly sweet transition to a different level of awareness. Good for Larry. Good for them all.

As I said, it reminded me of my first time when I made love with the girl who I finally married. It was beeautiful, and a wonderful memory.

The title says it all. It did indeed remind me of my first tme - although mine lacked an audience.

You have NAILED the feelings of Young life to a point of PERFECTION. PLEASE keep writting.

Perfect. Sensitively and so evocatively written

Romance, lust, joy of young love, this story has it all. I loved it!

It just gets better and better-so 😊 good!

The Best first time story ever. As always with your stories I give it 5 stars. Please don't stop.