ive read all of ur work, and the good thing about u is that u put so much different things in one whole story. I really love ur work
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Anonymous11/24/04
fantastic
Nice one mate!
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Anonymous05/10/05
Brillant
This piece is amazing, I just recently lost my virginity, and ironically is was with my best friends twin brother. You did a wonderful job on capturing the essence of their first time, again, amazing job.
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Anonymous05/11/05
A Almost Perfect Awakening Ch. 8-21
WOW!! LOVED IT ALL! i had planned to vote sooner but,became enthralled in your work and just couldn't wait to get to the next chapter...sorry about that. But this is a wonderful story and i love how you play back and forth with the brain reactions to you talking back to the brain...just enough humor to make it all the more interesting without breaking the spell of the story...i will continue to read on..Thank you Sir, for sharing with your fans and please continue on, a fan in Texas
The suspence was killing me! I'm 57 now, but remember my first time esconced within the velvet paradice of a womans vagina. I'm hoping my eventual demise will be something like that. A mindlessly sweet transition to a different level of awareness. Good for Larry. Good for them all.
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Anonymous01/08/06
it reminded me of my first time
As I said, it reminded me of my first time when I made love with the girl who I finally married. It was beeautiful, and a wonderful memory.
English
i love ur work
ive read all of ur work, and the good thing about u is that u put so much different things in one whole story. I really love ur work
fantastic
Nice one mate!
Brillant
This piece is amazing, I just recently lost my virginity, and ironically is was with my best friends twin brother. You did a wonderful job on capturing the essence of their first time, again, amazing job.
A Almost Perfect Awakening Ch. 8-21
WOW!! LOVED IT ALL! i had planned to vote sooner but,became enthralled in your work and just couldn't wait to get to the next chapter...sorry about that. But this is a wonderful story and i love how you play back and forth with the brain reactions to you talking back to the brain...just enough humor to make it all the more interesting without breaking the spell of the story...i will continue to read on..Thank you Sir, for sharing with your fans and please continue on, a fan in Texas
The moment of truth
The suspence was killing me! I'm 57 now, but remember my first time esconced within the velvet paradice of a womans vagina. I'm hoping my eventual demise will be something like that. A mindlessly sweet transition to a different level of awareness. Good for Larry. Good for them all.
it reminded me of my first time
As I said, it reminded me of my first time when I made love with the girl who I finally married. It was beeautiful, and a wonderful memory.
Wonderfully Erotic
The title says it all. It did indeed remind me of my first tme - although mine lacked an audience.
Perfectly AWESOME Story
You have NAILED the feelings of Young life to a point of PERFECTION. PLEASE keep writting.
Perfect. Sensitively and so evocatively written
Wonderful!
Romance, lust, joy of young love, this story has it all. I loved it!
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