Dancing

Interesting way to tell a story. And it works too. The only place you drop the ball a little is when Carla tells about the sex - somehow it feels as if she breaks character by volunteering too many details right away. I'd expect that more grilling were needed.

But a quick and good read.

1* nuff said

BRAD dude this was BADLY done and did not fool anyone

wow this sucked moose cock

glad you have no fetishes

you sick fuck, and the story was terrible.

Another sick fuck that needs to learn that cuckoldry is a FETISH and they have a category for that. Post this sick shit in the correct category sicko!!!

Another little cuck.

Writing stupid shit and jacking his little pecker,-1.

-5

you treat your wife like a whore. in your dreams she is shared with your scum
pal. any woman is to nice for you. you are sick.

Wife is a whore.

Wife is a whore she allowed herself to get fucked. Husband is a cuckold. You cannot defend the wife.

The all dialogue thing; it never worked well for me. If memory serves, and it may not, Robert Heinlein used something similar, if not the same, in "Friday."

What Happen to the story*

Or was this to be a funny story?

Where did Sweetie find Hubby?

It looks like Sweetie found Hubby at the Dollar Store, in the Close-Out bin! It also looks like it is time to take him to a White Elephant swap party! Maybe she can luck out and get a Lawn Flamingo (or a Garden Gnome statuette) in return!

The format was odd, but it worked. The Good Therapist is about as effective as she is professional. The records should have been securely destroyed on that medium before it was transferred!

Thanks for the comments.

Some of them were on topic and helpful.
Some of the others were from folks who obviously have no concept of what fiction is. For their benefit, none of these characters are real people and let me reiterate from the author's note, "It is entirely made up." That also means that there was no disk drive.
Oh, one more thing from Literotica's description of the various story categories: "Loving Wives - Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more" and "Fetish - Feet, panties, food, and other kinky things." This was clearly a Loving Wives story not Fetish.

Sexual majority and sexual minority husband stories

For the sexual majority husbands the extramarital fun is the cheating wife change for a better woman. This sexual fantasy is same good as other men's creampie eating for sexual minority husbands.
I wrote sexual majority husband stories with cheating wives.

It's just a story, but..

You should have stated up front that this was about to very stupid people. It wasn't very good.

I don't understand the comments, because I liked it: *****

And I loved the way Carla and I "communicated". She doesn't dance very well, but she sure can fuck and suck. I'll take her dancing anytime.

Jerry (aka tom anon)