by Okiedokes
Uh, this was ok but rather short. Is there going to be more when they hit the road or is this all to the story??
It shows how loving families cope when tragedy strikes. It is a tragedy that dad can no longer take care of his wife's cuntal needs because of his prostate surgery. But their big strong boy sure can. He's got the big stiff prick and the heavy loaded balls to do justice to his beloved mother's needy cunt, and then some! This is genuine family love, and it's a beautiful thing.
Two weeks is plenty of time for him and his mom to become lovers, and when they go back home from settling his grandmother's estate, his mom may have her son's baby in her belly.
A sweet loving story that can have a lot of different avenues that the story could take. It will be interesting in seeing how the author will handle the love affair with his mom and how his wife Jenny will be handled with out ruining his marriage, but still keep his mother as his lover.
Only one problem, we need more. They have two weeks to go, please keep it going.This was a good read,and I hope we see more................LAROC
good start, am looking forward to read more of them and their road trip
pretty good start, but a bit sudden. Some closeness and flirting could have lead to bigger and better over a 2 week trip.
Writer describes a family visit in which everything is so ordinary that the erotic activity seems quite natural.
Why do you writers always do this. Do you just get tired of writing. Start a good story and then leave every thing hanging. I write to but to have never left a story half done. BAD BAD BAD. I am Oldman. My password is fouled up and I am trying to get it fixed. I just wanted you to know who I was.
The mother is in a marriage without fulfillment . There should be a second chapter at least , where the son fills that emptiness in his mother's life and proceeds with regular making sure she no longer suffers being without the love and sex she deserved .
I hate stories that start off with "My mom had me when she was 17" TOTAL turnoff. Aren't any moms 30 or 35 when they give birth?
I like what I read and was surprised by how fast Mom came into the son's bedroom and gave him permission to fuck her. Will you add chapters 2 through 4 to the story?
If you do expand the story can you notify us as I really liked the way you wrote.
I have a hunch that you will expand the story into a 5 star score, and I do not want to miss it.
Dick
Gave it a 3 it was too damn short just a walk in eat and have mom for dessert???????????
I like character development in a story. I found it refreshing that mother and son had no psychological nor emotiona problems with making love with each other. There is no guilt or shame, simple unconditional love between two consenting abults. I am eager to read chapter 2.