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Movie Night Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/22/13

Story - What Story?

After removal of your ridiculous intorductory blurb, there were not enough words to make a story.

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by deltonaman2man05/22/13

Good start

You gave a lot a detail & build up. I thought it was very good for a 1st time writer. Don't let the trolls distract you. Waiting for the next installment.

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by Anonymous05/22/13

Agreed

Deltonaman... is right, great start, next chapter please......

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by Tarheels_Fan05/22/13

Awaiting the next chapter.

I think your build up and detail was most enjoyable. I am looking forward to see where this goes....

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by max05205/28/13

YES!

Very good writing skill. Great start. Very good job of building sexual tension. I forsee great things. Five stars!

max052

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