When you are finished, I would suggest you combine these into a single story instead of small single page episodes. You provide great build up and a teasing. Too many short chapters with no pay off my alienate some readers.
This is an erotica site with an Incest/Taboo section, your disclaimer is not really needed.
try a bite longer chapters pls but I do love the story you are handing it just right hot but note to sexy all at ones yours leannxxx
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Anonymous05/23/13
Good But...
You say you have written the story - well then, just post the damned thing instead of little dribbles.
You risk losing your readers by treating them like idiots who can only manage to read two pages at a time.
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Anonymous05/23/13
Chapter Length is fine
Don't listen to the weasels. You pace is excellent and I am getting hard thinking about the situation. I would ask that you keep them cumming, don't miss a day. Nice work.
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Combine These
When you are finished, I would suggest you combine these into a single story instead of small single page episodes. You provide great build up and a teasing. Too many short chapters with no pay off my alienate some readers.
This is an erotica site with an Incest/Taboo section, your disclaimer is not really needed.
Longer chapters please, this is agony
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good story
try a bite longer chapters pls but I do love the story you are handing it just right hot but note to sexy all at ones yours leannxxx
Good But...
You say you have written the story - well then, just post the damned thing instead of little dribbles.
You risk losing your readers by treating them like idiots who can only manage to read two pages at a time.
Chapter Length is fine
Don't listen to the weasels. You pace is excellent and I am getting hard thinking about the situation. I would ask that you keep them cumming, don't miss a day. Nice work.
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