your getting better all the time but pls make your chapters a littile longer but your storis are hot. ty leann xxxx
You just aren't listening to feedback. Still your absurd intro and silly little bits of story. I am off to read the works of authors who can manage more than one page at a time.
Ignore your foolish critics. Great work
Keep it going!
keep the series going getting so hot now
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keep it up
your getting better all the time but pls make your chapters a littile longer but your storis are hot. ty leann xxxx
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You just aren't listening to feedback. Still your absurd intro and silly little bits of story.
I am off to read the works of authors who can manage more than one page at a time.
keep up the great work
Ignore your foolish critics. Great work
good story
Keep it going!
keep the series going getting so hot now
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