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Bigger for Gwen Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/22/13

Standard slut wife story.

Solid 1 star. Nothing original. Just usual trash tale in Literotica. Almost all of the good posters have given up on this site.

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by Anonymous05/22/13

Too Slow to start

Too much reading until sex starts, we want sex at the get-go

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by Anonymous05/22/13

Typical Garbage for LW's Anymore

1* Move on Slut wife/Cuck Hubby tripe Don't bother with chapter 2

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by netviper2105/22/13

Should have...

Put in Fetish, Not very loving, and definitely not wife material. Thank God i skipped to the end.

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by Anonymous05/22/13

Erotic?

Perhaps if you are gay,bi,or some other kind of fetish, skimmed to the end, sad.-1!

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by slimjojo05/22/13

good start

please continue!

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by Anonymous05/22/13

I knew what to expect

with the author's name, story title, and line description, but still read anyway to see if there is anything different here. The motivations of those who get sexual arousal out of humiliation are so puzzling to me; I can't understand it. And besides boredom, and an urge to read something new, sometimes my curiosity gets the better of me, and I hope that maybe SOME author could explain this perversion and sickness. I never understood BDSM stuff either, but some authors HAVE done a fair job at explaining just why any sane person might indulge in that crap. Also, learned enough to know it isn't anything I'd ever want to be associated with beyond in print. Same thing with a few incest stories. A FEW authors take the time to explain the buildup of feelings and circumstance that might shed light to an explanation (although never a justification) for the most heinous of sexual perversions. But this cuckhold shit, man I STILL don't get it. Here in this story, you have a woman who has been married happily for years, and on the whim of an asshole she admittedly dislikes, begins to believe the husband she knows so well has latent homo feelings? She stops caring about him instantly, and witholds sex? I know you aren't done with this tale, but as you continue, if you could explain the motivations of him relenting and agreeing to what is obviously going to come about in further chapters, it might actually serve a purpose to read. Humiliation is sexy? I just don't get it, and I'm concerned you are on a path with this tale that won't explain it any better for us hard lined readers of this LW category. I read a story recently centered around reluctant cuckholding, and the author used a device where the "model" cuck who after years of abuse and mental cruelty commited suicide. The "mistress" seemed unaffected, as she had already given birth to the "bull's" baby. But whatever fetish extreme masochism caters to, I find it hard to believe that after destroying someone's self worth that totally, that suicide wouldn't be the natural conclusion in MOST cases. I keep waiting for someone to write a slut wife story, where the woman decides she DOESN"T want to be a slut anymore, and that her feelings of self worth are more important than cock size, or base gratification, and that the man who had ALWAYS been devoted to her totally deserves the REAL respect and devotion returned with faithfulness and appreciation. I read these disturbing cuck stories hoping beyond hope for the wake up call at the end, where the husband and wife look at eachother and go" Oh my GOD! what have we been doing to eachother"???? How do these cuck tales end? I have never read one where the marriage is stronger, or the intamacy between husband and wife is enriched in anyway. They are always about driving a wedge between two people in a marriage, and humiliating a man to a fragile echo of existance. Even most of the BDSM shit I have read, has the master making a commitment to take care of a slave who surrenders. But in these cuck tales, the story is never over until the hubby has been completely destroyed. So Smallercuck, is your story going to be any different? Will you help show us how any of this deviance could possibly be construed as love? Will your hot wife lose all respect for herself, and her hubby? How could this marriage survive? And what of your future? How many chapters will you churn out, before your bull finds you swinging from a rope, after fucking your wife for the umpteenth time? Do YOU even know what real love is, to be able to impart any of it to your characters? As an ANON, who should never critisize, you don't have to give me an answer to any of these questions. But dammit, as a man, you owe them to yourself.

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by Anonymous05/22/13

I Think the Last Commenter Had it Right

Why? Humilition really is not erotic but to a very small percentage of people and if their ws ever a FETISH that would be it. Why be married? What's the purpose? Last commenter had it right. I find these stories rather sad. Both for the wife and the husband.

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by Anonymous05/22/13

Cuckoldry is a FETISH!!!

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by Duna05/22/13

Groups

@ Anon There are more groups of the cuckoldry husbands (willing cuckolds).
1. Bisexual and (hid) homosexual husbands who likes creampies eating, to blow the bull's cock, etc....They enjoy the humulations from the wives and because of this homosexual tendency the normal 1-1 male-female connection is not important for them.
2. Porno abuser male people, who see wives, like living pornstars and turn on the group sex or the bull-hot wives sex scens. Why do they risk his health state with possibilties to get hepatitis A-B-C viruses???????

What the different to the cuckolds and wimps:

The wimps do not like the cuckold state, but they are stuck into a wrong marriage, but they live in this marriage, because of the children, money state, illness, but they do not enjoy this state. However they do not divorce.................

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by Anonymous05/22/13

My 2 Cents

This was an easy one - for all the reasons previously referred to this was truly pathetic based on plot characterization and content. At best this belongs in another genre

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by Duna05/22/13

I plan this

@ Anon my story plan is an revenge story with a cuckolding pair (from the 2th group a porno abuser husband) and they will stop this life style........I have in my story plans. I will write in 2 years interval.............But it will be revenge story........
My problem the lack of editor for me and for my stories. You can read them on SOL storiesonline.net.

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by Anonymous05/22/13

better title suggestion

Why not just call this miscategorized shit "one star my faggot ass?".

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by Anonymous05/22/13

Still wonder

Why in the hell is she married to somebody she does not love or respect?
Why is he married to an abusive bitch?
Would it be sexy if a husband beat his wife and fuck other women?
Would it be sexy if the wife beater then mocked his wife about her tiny tits?

Oh story suck the big brown one.

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by Anonymous05/22/13

Ok story

You can do a lot better. Be more realistic. You have a lot of good ideas and perspective. keep writing but don't go to far out..

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by Anonymous05/25/13

:rolleyes: at the haters ...

This story is off to a great start. Best part was the bed scene with Darren. Interesting touch that he has an "interest" in the bigger cocks at the gym. Looking forward to the next chapter!

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by teeneyw05/29/13

Very Hot Story So Far

Love the story so far. Great bedroom talk between the two of them. Can't wait for next chapter. Ignore the negative comments. Have no idea why they even read these stories.

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by desperate107/17/13

PLEASE send the next partS ASAP

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by Anonymous09/15/13

A slut

What's new or interesting about that? Certainly nothing new or interesting in this story.

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by karlikunt12/28/13

LOVED THE STORY

Great Start ! You captured my attention and my interest. Since I am a tiny dicked cuck, I could relate completely to the dynamics and underlying tension in this story. Especially loved the bedroom scene where the Hot Wife is teasing, questioning and humiliating her tiny dicked hubby. Can't wait to read more !!!!

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by CuckyJimmy01/16/14

Looking forward to chap. 2!

I can relate to this story so easily. I am also small and easily cum when my wife teases me in bed. However, she has never cucked me. Can't wait to read more!

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by beg4ignore03/13/14

What a fantastic story!!!

Thanks, please share part 2 when you can!

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