2: Beneath Orion, Worlds Apart 01

This book is goin to be tough

Wow

Huh, did NOT see Luke like that. An Intel job or something maybe. But I do admit that this make the story flow better. After all, he implied joining was going to be a sacrifice, and a desk job doesn't count. Thanks man, for this great story. I'm planning on going to basic training after oct... I hope I can handle it like Luke. No girl, but oh well, hahaha

Interesting...

Well, you did say it would be different. And you delivered. This was a very strong beginning to the next part of you story. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work, and thank you for sharing your work!

Rock ON!

You should have avoided the opening comments about moving on. I almost didn't read it but remembered I liked your style and did. Great stuff. One request write faster!

is kaylee prepared?

does she have enough D batteries, a vibrator, maybe some lube...hmmm...clothes pins and candles if she wants to get kinky? make audrey into her bitch and use a strap-on on her?
or just stick with her fingers?

To be honest-

I kind of get the feeling that there will be a high probability of Kaylee cheating on Luke.

Its inevitable that Kaylee will cheat, she's just that selfish.

great B

Great work on chapter 1 can't wait to read more.

Luke is her knight in Kevlar.

What A Non-sequitur!!!

Will have to relook this author -- maybe. This second piece in the series is quality work and a welcome reprieve of Luke and Kaylee, and this author. But, my very negative comments at the end of Educating Kaylee largely still stand. Even disregarding the out-of-nowhere left-field decision to enlist, considering the quality and nature of that story, that last chapter was one of the worst written and construed that I have ever read on this site. Even an intended cliffhanger must have some hope included. That did not with the end: will miss her forever, but it is not God's will? The attitudes and dialogue of Luke with Kaylee in that chapter is a total non-sequitur to the beginning of this piece in which Luke professes his total love for the most important thing in his life --Kaylee. WTF, over?