I'm glad you're continuing on with the story, but you really need to get some editing help. The errors were a bit distracting. Can't wait to read more though!
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Anonymous05/27/13
more more more
love it .. cant wait to read more .. maybe longer chapter next ??
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Anonymous05/28/13
Waited a long time
for this installment of the story. I've read each of the other chapters, repeatedly. I love the dynamic between Taylor & Nicki and I can't wait until the next chapter. Also, I agree that some editing would do some good. Other than that, very well done!
I hope you continue this story. I'm really getting into the characters and have been enjoying them. I really hope the girls end up together, eventually. However, there will probably be lots of drama till then. I do think you need to get an editor to run through it to catch the bugs though. I can't wait for the next installment.
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seduced
i like to masturbrate after READING this
Please Continue !!!
I love the story...
Editing needed
I'm glad you're continuing on with the story, but you really need to get some editing help. The errors were a bit distracting. Can't wait to read more though!
more more more
love it .. cant wait to read more .. maybe longer chapter next ??
Waited a long time
for this installment of the story. I've read each of the other chapters, repeatedly. I love the dynamic between Taylor & Nicki and I can't wait until the next chapter. Also, I agree that some editing would do some good. Other than that, very well done!
more please
I love this series...I sincerely hope you continue :)
I hope you continue this story. I'm really getting into the characters and have been enjoying them. I really hope the girls end up together, eventually. However, there will probably be lots of drama till then. I do think you need to get an editor to run through it to catch the bugs though. I can't wait for the next installment.
Great story
Lovely story, its very interesting, the characters are great but please do a thorough editing. Looking forward for the next awesome chapter.
yo nice story ...!
What happens next???! Pleas don't wait a month to write the rest of the story. Will be looking forward to it.
More....
I love this story. Please continue ... I need more
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