All Comments on 'Caught'

... to knowyou live in California. This is a well-written story, but scary as hell.

Some good ideas, especially the doctor's ones, but it could have been developed in a longer story (maybe a series ?)

I found this sort of confusing to keep track of the diff characters. Did you originallyrefer to master as Billy Walker and then change his name to Bobby/Robert Walker? Hard to follow and have no idea why she is being charged with Lisas murder by a DD. i liked all the implements from the doc, probably the best part.

People lost their lives because some rich piece of shit wanted to get laid. This is supposed to be fiction...

Again crap

couldnt read any further then the crap ad the police station get your head out of your ass no one would ever be arested for there murder and even if they were to treathen with that any dumb shit would know that it is not posible

further more did you know you can talk someone into killing himself make him so desprate he does not see an other way out and do you know what will happen ??

nothing becouze it is not a crime

I did not get the main idea. Nothing made sense here. The story was not even fiction, it was just a waste of time. ** for your time writing it.....

Wow. What an awful story.

Stupidest story I’ve ever encountered here. It reads as though it were written by a none-too-bright teenager. Registered slave program? WTF?