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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/23/13

Relieved...

... to knowyou live in California. This is a well-written story, but scary as hell.

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by Anonymous05/23/13

Some good ideas, but..

Some good ideas, especially the doctor's ones, but it could have been developed in a longer story (maybe a series ?)

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by Anonymous08/02/15

who is who?!?

I found this sort of confusing to keep track of the diff characters. Did you originallyrefer to master as Billy Walker and then change his name to Bobby/Robert Walker? Hard to follow and have no idea why she is being charged with Lisas murder by a DD. i liked all the implements from the doc, probably the best part.

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by Anonymous08/07/16

Not exactly The Rockford Files

People lost their lives because some rich piece of shit wanted to get laid. This is supposed to be fiction...

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