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I'll String Along With You

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/23/13

I love you

You sir write from my heart. I am a happily married man and my wife, as far as I know, has never cheated on me so I am not some angry divorced guy. What I am is a guy with a severe sense of right and wrong smothered and deep fat fried in a big ole smattering of justice. You have always written from my fantasies of these type situations. Ignore the grammar police screaming for you to get an editor or the reality police who yell from the mountain tops that it doesn't work like this in real life. Uh, news flash, this is a fiction site. We read for escapes. We read for entertainment and you sir entertain me greatly.

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by Anonymous05/23/13

Nasty

Good for a two star vote. I guess wife just discovered she was married to a psychopath.

Look to your soul man. This shit is not good for your mental health

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by tiger4605/23/13

over the top

The affair made him bitter not a better man. He should spend most of the $ on therapy.

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by BDEarth05/23/13

Quick and Interesting

Talk about a guy who carried a grudge! I liked it!!

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by EgoTrixi05/23/13

Ok..

so her husband turns out to be a vindicate bitch himself. Nothing against revenge, but this is taking the bucket way too far (for my taste, anyway).

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by Anonymous05/23/13

would have gotten rid of the

cunt twenty years earlier, love your stories because it pisses the sickos off,

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by Anonymous05/23/13

Let the punishment fit the crime?

I am all for btb most of the time, but in this case he went too far. We don't know any details of why back then, but she obviously recommitted herself to him as she didn't stray again. He could still leave her, but come on, leaving her destitute at 61. It would have been very difficult for her at 41 when the affair ended. Instead he stayed in the marriage for another 20 years for the sex and to render more severe punishment? Even a murderer after 20 years can get a pardon. What about the other 98% of his life. I wouldn't put up with being married to someone I hated no matter how great the sex. Seems to me he sentenced himself to 20 years in prison to punish her.

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by betrayedbylove05/23/13

Nice

Some people just don't get it. A wronged, betrayed man's revenge knows no limits. This was just a quick tale of how that revenge could manifest itself. She's lucky she survived.

Don't cheat.

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by Chagrined05/23/13

Goose and Gander?

I have noted that the worst revenge is always about men being cheated on by women. I have to ask how folks would like a woman to respond to a cheating husband?

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by chytown05/23/13

It's***

A read short and depressing!

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by Anonymous05/23/13

another wife caught

i LOVE your stories you write bout my life ONLY i never got the good end... keep it up

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by Anonymous05/23/13

What a wing nut!

There is no dress rehearsal for life! Why would he waste 20 years of his life? What idiot would applaud such stupidity? Not much of a story as a result.

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by Anonymous05/23/13

One sicko of a man

Instead of dealing with her affair he waited to destroy two lives. Maybe one could have been handled better. But to dump your wife after using her all those years makes for a sad story. He is as we call a bastard,son of a bitch, sick excuse for a man.

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by WoodsLord_354005/23/13

Meh

I read Literotica to find stories that make me feel good and turn me on.

Nicely written but I don't need any more depressing things.

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by Anonymous05/23/13

Outstanding!!!

This is the way, cheating is supposed to be dealt with - not that wimp husband bullshit.

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by Duna05/23/13

Selfpunish

If a betrayed husband remains with the cheating bitch for sake of his children, but he divorces his cheating wife after the graduation of his youngest child, that is a thing, There are some excellent stories with that plote. (OldHideki's fantastic super story is an example) I can understand that thing, but he punished himself to live with the cheating bitch for years. All right this is a Cruel Revenge story. I must give 5*****. If the owners of the Literotica had creat a new hub with the title Cheating Wives for the sexual majority husband stories, I would have given only 3***., but the two type stories are together here so my 5***** vote remains.

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by Anonymous05/23/13

So he lived with his whore wife for 21 years?

Too little, too late. Punishing some ridiculous old woman is meaningless - she's already had her fun at his expense.

He's a cuck, and any pretense at "anger" now when he's been getting cucked for the last 21 years by five different men is a stupid joke.

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by sugna05/23/13

Seconded

"I love you

You sir write from my heart. I am a happily married man and my wife, as far as I know, has never cheated on me so I am not some angry divorced guy. What I am is a guy with a severe sense of right and wrong smothered and deep fat fried in a big ole smattering of justice. You have always written from my fantasies of these type situations. Ignore the grammar police screaming for you to get an editor or the reality police who yell from the mountain tops that it doesn't work like this in real life. Uh, news flash, this is a fiction site. We read for escapes. We read for entertainment and you sir entertain me greatly."

I am from a similar demographic as above and I agree whole heartily, I too believe in justice. In the past the punishment for adultery was death. She is getting off easy.

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by cantbuymy05/23/13

you have a good mind for the story, sick, very sick, but good, in a sick sort of way. i cant quit laughing.

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by bruce2205/24/13

Who was he punishing?

Living for 20 years with someone you hate is not a good life.
But he wanted to get his revenge on the predador without going to prison.
But you know that back sixty years ago people shot the adulterous couple and then pleaded temporary insanity.. Of course if you do not have a gun.....

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by Duna05/24/13

Cruel revenge with betli play, but 21 years too many

I think some time table to wait 5 years for the the cruel revenge to wait 2-3-4 years for the betli play (to play a bankrupcy before divorce to give low share in the divorce is the betli play) is an more digestiveable plot, because maximum 9 years investment in a revenge.
However this is only 12-14 years shorter revenge, but he had 12-14 years without bitch life...............,

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by SparksWillFly05/24/13

Strange Duck

Not sure about you. Seems you might be pulling everyone's legs here. Not much revenge in staying with the cheater most of your adult life, just to punish her toward the end. Even then, you're punishing yourself just as much (bankruptcy, menial labor, etc). Might your real message be bitterness and revenge are so bad for both parties there will be no winners?

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by Anonymous05/24/13

Great Entertainment!

I'm not sure which is more entertaining, your story or the comments from the readers. Sticks and stones all over the place. Two decent quickies in a row. I sense a thread running through your stories that concerns anger. I wonder if it might have it's roots in your experience or is just the product of an active imagination. Thanks for sharing, keep writting.

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by Anonymous05/24/13

Revenge

...is not a verb.

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by RePhil05/24/13

Great Drive by Story!

Thanks for the quick snapshot of a mans retribution

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by JennyBear05/24/13

Too much.

I enjoyed the first story perhaps because I was fed up with the seemingly endless cuckold stories posted. This one not so much, A line from a Tim McGraw song comes to mind: "I don' t know why you have to be angry all the time". Oh well, ty for writing.

Jen

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by Anonymous05/24/13

So sick of these twisted "revenge" stories!

Story got a "1" from me. There should be a separate category for these revenge stories. Nothing sexy about a sick sadistic man who punishes everyone around him (himself included). I found it lacking in every way imaginable! IMO, only a truly depraved and person could enjoy this type of story, BAD stuff!

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by Anonymous05/24/13

The cucked will love it. Oh look, they do.

Myself not so much. 1*

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by Duna05/24/13

You are right

@ Anon you are right the sexual majority husband stories and the sexual minority husband stories should dived in two hubs! However the owners of the Literotica do not want to this.............Unfortunately.

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by Anonymous05/24/13

Way to get back at the cheating bitch and her boyfriend. Smacked them in the face from out of nowhere

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by dangerouslydead05/24/13

Anger

Yes, "Anger" is a running theme of my stories. If you read my profile you will realize that I am writing these stories to release pent up anger. I am a very mild mannered guy; I am one with a wild imagination and I use my imagination to release my negative energy. I know it is unfair to subject all of you to these hateful stories and evil characters. I generally do not post here, mostly on SOL. I just posted here because I was fed up with all the cuckold shit being posted here. I appreciate your time reading the story.

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by Anonymous05/24/13

Dangerouslydead

Thanks for posting this. You are right. A breath of fresh air from all the cuck tales being posted here. Might have been a bit over the top but I would rather read this than the other trash being posted.Keep writing.

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by brujay05/24/13

Uhhhhh................harsh......................

A little extreme for me, but I'd certainly would like a followup to this story.

Thank you for sharing your stories. Please keep on writing.

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by Anonymous05/27/13

You are correct

This story seems to function as proof of the fact that you are VERY angry. While I understand his anger at his wife, it seems to me that he waited around for a long time to get some revenge. Had she really been a good wife all those years after her affair? Did that not serve to lessen his anger? Memories fade over the years and it seems a tad unrealistic that he would hold onto that much anger for all those years. Especially after he practically murdered her lover. A paraplegic? That's pretty harsh. Makes him a criminal. And a not-nice-guy.

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by Anonymous07/03/13

Some good ideas...

for me to think about..

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by Anonymous08/10/13

Strange you

You wrote a good story, but got low ratings, paybacks are a bitch LADIES......bill

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by tazz31708/10/13

NO MATTER HOW MUCH PAIN YOU ENDURE

is the payback worth Peace Of Mind, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Tavadelphin09/27/13

Ouch 22 years later?

And she was the perfect wife for all of that?

She proved she would not repeat it and still nuclear?

That is some weird anger dude - to hide it that well that long while she did all the right things to make up for (except confess and apologize of course she was not perfect at all) that is well - just a bit extreme.

But the exit was priceless heh

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by Anonymous11/08/13

And you think that actually worked?

Still laughing at your stupidity and the failure of this silly story.

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by betrayedbylove11/16/13

Lesson Learned

Don't cheat. Somehow, someway. sometime the betrayed party will get their revenge.

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by harrycarton03/03/14

This is a pure hate story. Didn't like it at all.

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by Anonymous03/12/14

Love it

I think it is great. It should happen to a lot of cheating wives.

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by Anonymous03/20/14

almost

Would have been a five but he waited too damn long to get his revenge.

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by Anonymous04/02/14

A nice fantasy

But don't you think she would have gotten an attorney and that said attorney would have gotten both a PI and a forensic accountant involved? No money? Not needed. Any good attorney would have taken a brief look, seen the possibilities and either taken her on pro bono or on contingency. Always a lot of scum bags in the ranks of attorneys sniffing around for a money maker and you were one. Finding your cabin would have taken about 3 or four hours. You're toast my friend. Nice fantasy, but you lost.

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by Anonymous04/10/14

Fantasy...

Don't think that's how it works in the real world. Nice to be able to fantasize that it could. Great story.

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by impo_5809/28/14

Revenge is best served cold....

Revenge is best served cold....But he served it frozen...

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by Anonymous08/31/15

HAHA! Almost good revenge

But of course she has his Social Security. And at age 62 she can claim it. Not much but she won't be destitute. She would have no trouble finding a greedy lawyer that will take her case for a percentage of what he recovers. And since you're going to be living in New England, a good PI will have no problem tracing your past travels to the cabin. Which means she owns half the cabin. And anything else he finds. Plus which, I'm sure the Police will want to investigate your finances and you're assault on Paul. At the rate you're going, you'll be lucky to avoid substantial jail time. Nice fantasy, but an implausible one.

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by Anonymous12/16/15

Hey Anon--

I think the statute of limitations is up on the assault charge, as it was 15 years ago. Just sayin...

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by c24j02/03/16

So like, she wins in the end.

Anony - Since it was premeditated and the injury was disabling - leaving the victim unable to walk and perhaps impotent, it will probably be classified as a heinous crime . . . no statue of limitations for criminal prosecution . . . I don't know about civil. I think there can be a civil suit if the damage is 'tolled' (held for other than the date of original incident . . . e.g. later discovery of injury, later discovery of perpetrator, etc. . . . it depends upon the State).

So, she tells Paul and the police. Husband goes to jail. She sells cabin (which will be found) - though if Paul CAN sue, he'll get most or all of it, if not, she splits her half with Paul, and leaves half the cash for husband . . . but he owes alimony, which will come out of his half . . .and she'll get some of his Social Security when she turns 62. He'll probably rot and die in prison while she'll probably manage.

Revenge is seldom worth it. It is NOT a dish best served cold . . . it is a dish best served intelligently, which he failed to do. The best revenge is living well . . . which he won't, but she might . . . so the final revenge will be hers . . . unless she truly loves him, in which case she will share his suffering.

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by tazz31703/11/16

A LOT OF HATE

for the total destruction of BTB, TK U MLJ LV NV

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