patience
Great beginning. Please continue. Thanks
Amazing imagery, can't wait to see the next chapter.
Seems to be an interesting story unfolding. A couple of grammatical errors but apart from that I really like this start
This tale is pretty original. I like it so far but I'm wondering where the story will go. I'll stay tuned. I also like the description.
patients needs doctors, patience can grow thin ..
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patience
intriguing
Great beginning. Please continue. Thanks
Amazing imagery, can't wait to see the next chapter.
Good beginning
Seems to be an interesting story unfolding. A couple of grammatical errors but apart from that I really like this start
black unicorn
This tale is pretty original. I like it so far but I'm wondering where the story will go. I'll stay tuned. I also like the description.
needs an editor
patients needs doctors, patience can grow thin ..
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