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*****
"Too good to be true" comes to mind, but maybe that's being cynical.
Five.
Really enjoying this story!
Thanks for sharing your talents. I agree, it almost sounds too good to be true. I hope Sara doesn't get hurt, she is very sweet.
To All The Readers
Thanks to all the readers and supporters. This is my first story in years, and I wanted to make it short and sweet. It is too good to be true; I also agree, but I plan to make my future stories more in depth and closer to real life. Thanks again to everyone who favorited and rated :)
Very good
I think it was very sensual and erotic.
I really enjoyed it.
jummie
I thought it was fucking HOT!
Love it!!
Great story. Looking forward to the update. Love the chemistry between the two!
That was awesome!!! I hate to see this great story end.
yesss
this has to be the sweetest love story i hav ever read. you are amazing and you really no how to how to make your story come to life.. you can pull people into the story and make them want to read more. please keep writing.
Love this series!
Great tale. I'm enjoying your work. :)
I'm keeping you!!!!
Perfect ending....perfect on all levels.
You have bodacious writing skills and are a
keeper!!!!
in aww
Loved the story. Good job! :)
Yeaaaah!
I loved it. I really did. You may not have to finish it...maybe an epilogue.
mmmmmmm daaaayyyuuummmmm!!!!
That was HOTTTTTT hun!!!!!! ;3
SO GOOD ALMOST CRIED
I AGREE WITH FAWNSAGE AN EPILOGUE WOULD BE GREAT, LOVED THIS SO MUCH
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;l i guess im more of a many more chapters kinda girl
I enjoyed this!!!
I like your writing style, and will be reading more from you!!!!
Awww
This story was so sweet.
At the beginning I was afraid Chris was wooing her because of some sick bet/joke. But luckily he was the real deal.
Thank you.
AWWWWSOME
This was such a lovely story. The big girl found someone that really cared for her and wanted to be with her. It was very touching. It is very hard for someone like her to trust especially when they have been hurt in the past. I'm glad she found love. Can you do another one and make it a little longer? Something this good should be longer. Since I can only give a five then a five star it is.
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