by Soft1017
"Too good to be true" comes to mind, but maybe that's being cynical.
Five.
Thanks for sharing your talents. I agree, it almost sounds too good to be true. I hope Sara doesn't get hurt, she is very sweet.
Thanks to all the readers and supporters. This is my first story in years, and I wanted to make it short and sweet. It is too good to be true; I also agree, but I plan to make my future stories more in depth and closer to real life. Thanks again to everyone who favorited and rated :)
Great story. Looking forward to the update. Love the chemistry between the two!
this has to be the sweetest love story i hav ever read. you are amazing and you really no how to how to make your story come to life.. you can pull people into the story and make them want to read more. please keep writing.
Perfect ending....perfect on all levels.
You have bodacious writing skills and are a
keeper!!!!
I loved it. I really did. You may not have to finish it...maybe an epilogue.
I AGREE WITH FAWNSAGE AN EPILOGUE WOULD BE GREAT, LOVED THIS SO MUCH
I like your writing style, and will be reading more from you!!!!
This story was so sweet.
At the beginning I was afraid Chris was wooing her because of some sick bet/joke. But luckily he was the real deal.
Thank you.
This was such a lovely story. The big girl found someone that really cared for her and wanted to be with her. It was very touching. It is very hard for someone like her to trust especially when they have been hurt in the past. I'm glad she found love. Can you do another one and make it a little longer? Something this good should be longer. Since I can only give a five then a five star it is.
I want to say thanks to you the first author I think so far that has written a sweet love story. No drama, no racial bias or slurs, no violence just a sweet story. I get teased for being to skinny so it goes both ways. It's refreshing to read a simple sweet love story. I
hope there's another chapter for Sara and Christian. Again thanks happy writing