Short, hot, and changes direction just as you pull the reader in. Nicely done. Thx!
A quick hot story, plenty of openings for continuing over many chapters.
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Nice Play
Short, hot, and changes direction just as you pull the reader in.
Nicely done.
Thx!
Hot
A quick hot story, plenty of openings for continuing over many chapters.
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