The Ballad of Zachery Carson Ch. 06

great again

just a little cruel to stop at the point you did, can't wait for the next chapter.

Another Great Chapter in this Series!!!

You've written you have written another great chapter in this series of Zack Carson. I wonder what you going to do with Zack and Kathleen in the next chapter? In some way I hope that they get together after all they've been through in the first couple of chapters. Keep up the good work.

Mark

All in the proper wording for the Old West

You really do like to put us on the edge of the cliff. It really at this point sounds as if Kathleen was happy to be back with him........

I think one of the best comments one can give an author ...

is when the reader gets to the end of the chapters and says ... damn ... I have to wait until tomorrow!

GREAT STORY

You write great and the westerns are my favorites. Wouldn't bother me a bit if you stuck with them and became more prolific as well!

Keep up the great work.

I realize this was a good place to end the chapter, but it certainly leaves us hanging. Hopefully Lady Kathleen will tell Zach that she plans to stay at the ranch and the romancing can begin. Great story, really enjoying it.