Twisted Love Ch. 01

I like this 5 stars

But it was too short can't wait for the next update

Good

But way too short!

Coming Soon!

They were all uploaded simultaneously ladies, just waiting for approval :)

Hate to be repeat the same comment but it was too short. Looking forward to the next installment. I love this kind of story.

why do you make your chapters so short? I'm just getting into the story, then it ends, its maddening and a sure fire way to lose readers too.

:(

I'm sorry that my chapters are so short, but I have a busy life. It takes me a while to write and I upload as I go along. I am also new and not used to writing very long chapters. Hopefully you all will be patient with me as I'm trying to have a positive experience here.

I Like It

There's enough spice in this particular chapter that will keep the curious coming back for more. The scene has been set, the main character has flesh, now we just need some sugar. Hopefully it will be a gentle build up to what I anticipate maybe a great romance!

I like your stories, however they are a little short, maybe don't rush to put out the short chapters, leave it longer and submit 2 as one instead? You are the writer, don't rush on account of us, your readers, if we enjoy your story we will wait. It is refreshing to see characters that aren't blonde bimbos, so please keep writing.

Love it!!

I love it, I want more!!! But it was just a bit too short :-( 10/10

that was short but loved it update

Lovers it update

Great start!

You're doing an awesome job. People a bit upset with the chapter being short is usually because they are that interested in what will happen next. Please keep writing. Can't wait to see what comes next!

*****

Good start.

Five.

Me likey!!!

WOW

This story is super bad.

So good

When I got my tattoo I totally related. Some where so bad I just walked right back out. I found a kick ass lady to do mine. (she had meat on her bones too and I felt super comfortable)......but now me thinky I should have waited for a luke Darngit!

pretty cool

i like what im seeing ...soo far ;]

Who knows ? Mebbee....

I was disappointed this story was ended already.
It is not a story yet !
Maybe ! It has possibilities!
We'll see...