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What?
Confusing tale. Only one thing is for sure. The husband is a cheating fucking asshole.
I hate cheaters.
Cheaters
Be they man or women cheaters are the lowest form of life.
Humorous?
I can't find cheating on his wife as funny as you intend it to be. But I guess it is better than the alternative: rape.
No means no, not try harder.
Belongs in either non con or non erotic.
Clever
Clever and funny. Sharply delivered. Nice twist. 5 stars.
just a note - it is feil not fell. and i was laughing my ass off.
A clever twist to end the story, good read.
My 2 Cents
The poem was the best part of this tale. Yes the twist at the end was clever but not worth the effort. The wife is as dumb as a post for "forcing" her husband to rape Wendy. The husband was a cheat! Where are all you cheat haters? If he has been banging her for some time he may also be guilty of statutory rape. Still think it was a fun read?
Interesting Read
I think if Penny really wanted to punish Wendy it would have went even better if she sat on her face and made Wendy eat her pussy while her husband fucked Wendy.
Doctor Fell
Actually, cantbuymy, it IS Dr FELL.
Love your stuff
Perfect SHORT but complete stories for an afternoon break.
@Anon - 2 cents
Babysitter is described as 19 years old. They would have had 1 to almost 2 years under LIT's age criterion.
Hubby would have been better advised to wait for the USUAL 'slap & tickle' session! Sweetie will calm down sometime, and Hubby will be maligned for following wrongful 'orders!' For those who argue that logic prohibits Sweetie from criticizing Hubby, the first rule is 'vaginas trump logic!'
Good little twist at the end, but it was frequently foreshadowed during the coitus!
Short***
Story.
Hot *****
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