more man its damm short it can be 2 pages at least
by
Anonymous06/30/13
when are you doing part 2??
by
Anonymous06/28/14
This was about sampling sister-in-law and niece
He didn't sample the niece
by
Anonymous10/24/14
Just a random quickie cheating story.
He never did the niece and the bro's wife is either cheating (not my scene) or will turn into some kind of swapping and sharing thing which is even worse in this category. There is even a pretty clear gay subtext to the whole setup tossed in for good measure. The only thing this story doesn't actually get into is much of an incest angle.
I'm done. It's already off to a bad start. The only good thing was the physique of the women being curvy instead of the typical stacked slim supermodels guys mostly write about. Start over and keep it more simple and straight hopefully in a fresh submission.
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Good Grief...
What a stupid waste of time. This is the dumbest story I seen here...
too short
more man its damm short it can be 2 pages at least
when are you doing part 2??
This was about sampling sister-in-law and niece
He didn't sample the niece
Just a random quickie cheating story.
He never did the niece and the bro's wife is either cheating (not my scene) or will turn into some kind of swapping and sharing thing which is even worse in this category. There is even a pretty clear gay subtext to the whole setup tossed in for good measure. The only thing this story doesn't actually get into is much of an incest angle.
I'm done. It's already off to a bad start. The only good thing was the physique of the women being curvy instead of the typical stacked slim supermodels guys mostly write about. Start over and keep it more simple and straight hopefully in a fresh submission.
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