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by Anonymous05/24/13

Nice sentiment Doc, obviously English is your second language

Kudos on your mastery
note: women should be woman to agree with (a) and (man)
"Humility...band" is not understandable as it stands
Last line, eliminate the semicolon
Where did you get your degree?

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