- All
Comments (6) - Add a
Comment - Send
Feedback Send private anonymous feedback to the author (click here to post a public comment instead).
| Literotica Toy Store ADULT TOY & DVD STORE FAST & DISCREET |
Literotica XXX Webcams 24/7 LIVE CAMS - FREE PREVIEW W/AUDIO! |
Literotica Adult Movies STREAMING ADULT MOVIES PAY PER MINUTE |
English
One of the best.
Showing some age, the first 2 lines of 'Don't fear the reaper' were, "All our times have come, Here, but now they're gone." Just a perfect overture for your story.
Thought you captured the insouciance and nervousness of Amber very well. The climax, perhaps a tad obvious, I thought written very well and evocative.The series was great, enjoyable and a super First Time story.
Great stuff.
Fucking rubbish
dont write any more
hiding behind anonymity
Don't listen to the anonymous poster. You are a talented writer and i enjoyed all the chapters
Thank you
Sweet delightful genuine.
Actually believable and pleasing erotica.
No bra size, no cock size, no wildly improbable cursing during sex.
Two nice people making out, growing bolder, being real
So - I may have said it before - thank you.
I said it before.
This series was truly delish.
Ignore the 'ANONY- MOUSES' who only seem able to crap on others but don't have the gutz or ability to put anything down themselves.
Peachier - Outstanding
Chapter 3 was even better than 1 and 2. I could feel what Amber was feeling. You brought me as near as a mere man can come to understanding female sexual sensations and emotions. Again, I suspect that Amber's story is mostly the story of your own sexual awakening.
Please keep on writing.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Amber's Awakening Ch. 03 or
More submissions by CarolinaPeach.