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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/27/13

"you"!!!!!!!

Total crap!!

"I" was not there/did not take part!!
Therefore the story is absolutely, totally, unbelievable and is therefore a complete waste of time and effort!!

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by Anonymous09/17/13

Liked it

I like the concept, but the grammatical mistakes and sentence structures made it look unprofessional. Maybe a new revision would make this even better.

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