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Training Day: Rebekah Ch. 02

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by Anonymous05/27/13

Painful pleasures of rough 'BDSM' treatment by a sadistic 'MASTER'! Voted 5 for authenticity.

I was trained to accept extreme genital pain from an early age by similarly vicious father to become nothing but a worthless pain-slut. Thankfully; in later years I took ideal revenge, after training naked fully shaven younger male students to become super-submissive to my own kinky desires. --Now as a 'CFNM' Mistress to several impressionable young men, I teach male followers to entertain my adoring feminist activists, by submitting to compulsory masturbation on a daily basis. Fear not young Rebecca: sadistic 'BDSM' training will be well rewarded hopefully, if you'd only accept strict instruction from 'Mistress Barbara' in training several naive-submissive males into the noble art of auto-masturbation followed by female-enforced cunnilingus.

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by TorrentialVortex05/30/13

I Love Feedback

I enjoy feedback from all types, but if you're going to be rude, degrading, and mean, don't bother, I will delete the comment. If you didn't like the story, fine, tell me what you didn't like, maybe its something I can work on changing so you can enjoy my writing in the future, but don't belittle mistakes or call me names.
Please, feel free to leave a response, but let it be helpful, even if you disliked the story, you can tell me why without being rude or cruel.
Thank you, again to all my readers, I will continue to post at least one new chapter a week for the next few weeks. They are all titled Training Day: (names) I have one that was submitted for Taboo/Incest as it describes an encounter with Brandon and his family to offer some background. The "Alibi" is also being put in the works so that it is far more believable. Again, this is meant to be an Erotic story, not a criminal suspense, so don't expect a C.S.I. episode.

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by mel_pomene06/18/13

This is, without doubt, a harsh story

If it is not to your taste, you have every right to tell the author as much. It is often said that we can't please everyone but rudeness of such a vitriolic nature is hardly appropriate on a site for those who consider themselves adult. To do so from the protected position of anonymity diminishes whatever you have to say anyway. As the author rightly points out, no-one is 'twisting your arm'; if you don't like TT's stories, don't read them - that way everyone is happy.

I have to say I thought it was pretty good - not the best and not entirely my thing, but well-crafted, literate and entertaining. I wish the same could be said for all the stories published here.

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by babygirla12/11/13

Beautifully Written

I am just LOVING this series !
All of these... it may be too much for many...but I love 'too much' !
And I just don't get it why people keep reading this only to comment rude ! If you do'nt like it harsh and if you are not into this , that does not mean there aren't others who love this -_- So you guys can do a favor and stop commenting rude and calling names !

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