Taking Charge Pt. 02

well, honestly......i am trying to still keep an open mind about your story after your reply to my comments........but ........ it seems as if cheating and extra marital affairs and infidelity is OK by your characters.

Too jealous

I'm a jealous one. Affair or not, I would still want him to myself. Can't really embrace the group sex scene in this case. Good writing, but difficult to enjoy myself. I hope she gets him to herself soon and that Carole gets the hell out. LOL

@wolf

" it seems as if cheating and extra marital affairs and infidelity is OK by your characters."

Well, it certainly is okay for a lot of them, particularly those that came right out and said it was. :) I'm not saying it's okay at all, but I'm not my characters.

@joodle

"I'm a jealous one. Affair or not, I would still want him to myself. Can't really embrace the group sex scene in this case. Good writing, but difficult to enjoy myself."

I totally get that. I'm not good at sharing either, and I'm terrible at dividing my attention between two partners. I've tried it before, and the experiences were awkward at best, despite the happy endings. I have a really difficult time writing from the perspective a person that is trying to split their attention between two lovers. This scene was easier because Becca's participation in the scene strictly applied to Jake (from a physical standpoint). If I'd tried getting her to play with Jake and someone else, it wouldn't have worked well at all. I understand that scenes like this won't work for everyone, so I hope later scenes will still peak your interest.

Thank you for the feedback!

Great Read

Love this story so far. Can't pull myself away from the computer to stop reading it. So wrapped up in the characters.

I would not do any of this, but . . .

I certainly find it sexy as hell. I don't like infidelity as I was cuckolled in my first marriage and it hurt, a lot, for a long time. That, for me, just stretches my "open-mindedness" in making believe I am part of (or at least observing) the story that Red Writinghood is creating. I have never seen a man this big, and I spent 10 years in school locker rooms and men's shared lilving quarters and three years in the army with no privacy whatsoever, but it makes a good story. I am not saying freaks of nature don't occur, just that I have never observed one. Lynn