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by Roslien21

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erectus123erectus123almost 11 years ago
nicely done

"volcano bursting at brunch" is a little jarring unless you live in Hawaii, but maybe that indicates your sexual desire at brunch time? Nice poem that is a pleasure to read. Thankful for the highly sexed exuberant women like you who post here, we are lucky to have your company confirming that sexual desire is equal between the sexes!

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