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GlaxistGlaxistalmost 11 years ago
Ahahaha

Didn't see that coming :)

redpassionredpassionover 10 years ago
Mind is a bitch

I felt sorry for you until I saw the last line, Thanks it made me laugh

tazz317tazz317over 10 years ago
BRINGS ONE BACK TO THE "OLD SMOKY" BALLAD

this time a different out-take, TK U MLJ LV NV

LyricalliLyricallialmost 9 years ago
Ok, I admit it

I laughed out loud. Then I read it to someone with the most sensual voice I could muster (while trying not to giggle). That last line got a pretty good laugh. Well done, you.

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