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by Anonymous

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by HarryHill05/26/13

:)

cute n clever

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by Glaxist06/26/13

Ahahaha

Didn't see that coming :)

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by redpassion11/30/13

Mind is a bitch

I felt sorry for you until I saw the last line, Thanks it made me laugh

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by tazz31711/30/13

BRINGS ONE BACK TO THE "OLD SMOKY" BALLAD

this time a different out-take, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Lyricalli06/26/15

Ok, I admit it

I laughed out loud. Then I read it to someone with the most sensual voice I could muster (while trying not to giggle). That last line got a pretty good laugh. Well done, you.

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