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by Anonymous

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by BobNbobbi05/29/13

Four letter word

Starts with R

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by Anonymous05/29/13

another person

who lives in his mother basement or you could just be retarded or both. What a true waste of ink.

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by Anonymous05/29/13

Crap Story

Pure and simple. More like rape. Yuk!

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by Anonymous05/29/13

another crap story by an author with a fucked up sense of right and wrong! Where do you come up with this rape bullshit? You are a sadistic fucker!

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by Anonymous05/29/13

What the hell was that???

Bobby isn't a mans name, it's a boys name and it shows. This was a lame attempt at an erotic story. Maybe non erotic would have been a better fit?

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by GimletEdge05/29/13

Silly comment. Bobby is a man's name.

Bobby Knight, Bobby Darin, Bobby Fischer, Bobby Flay, Bobby Kennedy, Bobby Sherman, Bobby Orr, Bobby Labonte, Bobby Brown... and lots more of 'em.

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by Anonymous05/29/13

only reason I opened this...

The only reason I opened this mental midget's story is to give it a 1. I'm not sure why his mother allows him internet access.

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by Anonymous05/29/13

Garbage

Just another junk story posted on Literotica

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by Lickideesplit05/29/13

Misses being rape

A cute little flash-fuck tale. There are several key points which save this from rape. Our Hero suggests she relax and let herself be ogled. She does NOT have to do that...she can scream...it IS a party and they are NOT out of earshot. When she DOES relax and let herself be felt-up, he warns her that his intent has upgraded, and she should consider panicking. She, instead and in a low volume, indicates that the venue is not ideal! Screaming at any time up to now would neutralize Our Hero's aggressive intrusion, but she does not do it, despite being told his intention!

At NO point does he threaten her, physically or otherwise, with anything more deadly than premature ejaculation!

After-the-fact reconsideration should NOT forgive authentic rape. But, in this case Sweetie's after-coupling conversation with Hubby indicates that she did not EVER consider this interaction unwelcome, except being in a setting she considered too risky! Reluctant, yes, but her reluctance was limited to time and place!

Hot! A quick last comment about when she would be going to the library would have upgraded a 4* to 5*

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by Anonymous05/30/13

It is 3rd degree sexual assault

Uninvited exposure of a victim's genitals. But this is a complete fantasy story, in real life the narrators actions would result in screams, others being alerted etc
Silly story

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by Anonymous05/30/13

This is a RAPE tale!

Fuck YOU for having the sick mind to write this shit! If she didn't want it, then don't force it. FUCK UP WRITER!!! I hope this happens to your wife BITCH!!

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by Anonymous06/02/13

"He couldn't recognise a piece of shit if he ate it."

What kind of immature idiotic comment is that? Grow up you fucking troll and leave lickidee the fuck alone.

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by Anonymous06/12/13

There is a saying about reality being more weird then made up stories. This story reminded me of what happened to me a few months after I got married. My husband and I had been back from our honeymoon and we were invited to my parent’s house to a family swim party to catch up and cool off. After I was in my bikini and we all were at the pool my mother called me in to help with food. Inside I was surprised to find an ex boyfriend of mine in the living room. He said he missed me and needed to talk. Once he got me alone he forced a kiss and said he wanted to prove we were more meant to be together than I was with my husband. Soon after that he forced his way with me. I always told him ‘No’ but I admit I didn’t scream or fight with my full efforts. I’m pretty sure that he thought I liked it that day. I’m pretty sure my mother helped him think that. Why? Because a week and two days later, minutes after my husband left for work, guess who was at my front door? Yup, and my mother gave him my address. I didn’t know it when I looked through the key hole. He had his back to the door and from the back they look alike and I assumed he was my husband, forgetting something. That ex barged right in and didn’t take ‘no’ for an answer again. He didn’t say three words to me before ripping my clothes off and screwing me in the living room. When he was done we had a long talk and it was the last time he forced himself on me. When my husband came home I told him EVERYTHING. I didn’t want this to wreak our marriage but I don’t believe in peeping secrets from you spouse either.

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by Anonymous08/08/13

some pretty fucked up coments

I actually feel like commenting on the comments. To the lady who cheated her husband! He shouldve divorced your ass! I think u wanted to get fucked by ur x

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by Anonymous12/06/13

BULLSHIT!

Bobby needs to get some real friends, not hang around with assholes that are just looking for the latest piece of ass to jump. This may be realistic but damn!

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by Design8207/23/14

Well written, and quite humourous (which is strange considering the lady just about got raped!!).

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